Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и логичным. Избегайте непонятных выражений и старайтесь использовать связные предложения. Также важно не превышать 5 предложений и избегать излишней информации.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially because many of them live in different cities. We often catch up through messages or video calls, which helps us stay connected despite the distance. I find these conversations very enjoyable and refreshing.

提案: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и понятным. Используйте связующие слова для логического перехода между идеями и избегайте повторений.

例: We usually talk about recent events in our lives, such as personal achievements or challenges. Additionally, we discuss mutual friends and how their lives are changing. These topics help us stay updated and share our experiences.

提案: Ответ содержит непонятные слова и прерванные мысли. Следует отвечать полно и ясно, избегая лишних слов и ошибок. Используйте связные предложения и завершайте мысли.

例: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I prefer chatting with a group, especially when discussing study-related topics. Other times, I prefer talking one-on-one for more personal conversations.

提案: Ответ должен быть более чётким и структурированным. Избегайте неопределённых слов и старайтесь использовать связки для плавного перехода между идеями.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal. However, sometimes it's necessary to use social media or video calls, especially when meeting in person is not possible.

提案: Ответ прерван и содержит некоторые грамматические ошибки. Следует завершать мысли и использовать правильные формы слов. Также полезно добавить примеры или объяснения.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, even the closest ones. However, these disagreements don't harm our relationships because we always find common ground in the end. I believe that occasional arguments are normal in any friendship.

× I have a lot of friends in distant cities so we like in pogrom tour another

✓ I have a lot of friends in distant cities so we like to program tour each other

The phrase 'we like in pogrom tour another' is incorrect due to plural and word choice errors. 'Pogrom' is likely a misspelling of 'program' and 'another' should be 'each other' to indicate mutual action. Also, 'like' should be followed by 'to' plus verb. The correction fixes plural and word usage to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× so we like in pogrom tour another

✓ so we like to program tour each other

The verb 'like' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to program' rather than 'in pogrom'. The original phrase is unclear and likely a mishearing or misspelling. Using 'like to program tour each other' corrects the verb form and meaning.

× so I need to chat with them this Friday

✓ so I will chat with them this Friday

The phrase 'this Friday' refers to a future time, so the verb should be in the future tense. Using 'will chat' correctly indicates a future action rather than present tense 'need to chat' which implies necessity but not future action.

× Mostly we discuss the recent news that happened in our life

✓ Mostly we discuss the recent news that happened in our lives

The word 'life' should be plural 'lives' because it refers to multiple people. 'Our' indicates plural possession, so the noun should be plural to agree.

× and and what really people really like to discuss is the change in these lives

✓ and what people really like to discuss is the change in these lives

The repetition of 'and' is redundant and incorrect. Also, the word order 'really people really' is awkward; it should be 'people really'. Removing the extra 'and' and correcting word order improves clarity.

× some cases require communication with more than one people

✓ some cases require communication with more than one person

The phrase 'more than one people' is incorrect because 'people' is plural and 'one' is singular. The correct singular noun is 'person'.

× I prefer to connect face to face

✓ I prefer to connect face-to-face

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adverb or adjective: 'face-to-face'. This is a standard grammatical convention.

× our relationships gets worse

✓ our relationships get worse

The subject 'relationships' is plural, so the verb should be 'get' not 'gets' to agree in number.

× our relationships gets worse

✓ our relationships get worse

The verb must agree with the plural subject 'relationships'. 'Gets' is singular, so it should be 'get'.