Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้ 'chatting' ให้เหมาะสมกับโครงสร้างประโยค และเพิ่มความชัดเจนในการสื่อสารโดยใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงกันอย่างเป็นธรรมชาติ

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because we can share our experiences and support each other, which makes me feel relaxed and comfortable.

提案: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหล เช่น ใช้ 'usually chat about' แทน 'usually chatting' และเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด

例: I usually chat with my friends about daily life and work experiences. For example, if I have a problem at work, I discuss it with them to find solutions.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงการใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อแสดงความแตกต่างและเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน

例: I prefer chatting with a group or just one friend depending on the situation. Sometimes, private conversations are better for personal matters, while group chats are good for sharing ideas.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้โครงสร้างประโยคและคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงการใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่ออธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติ

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to express myself clearly and understand others' emotions, which is harder through social media.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง รวมถึงการจัดระเบียบประโยคให้ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อแสดงความหมายอย่างถูกต้อง

例: No, I rarely argue with my friends. If we have different opinions, we usually discuss them calmly instead of arguing.

× Yes, I like to chatting with my friends because they can share their experience with me and I can share my strength to them so we can share everything together. Make it feel unwind and relaxed.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because they can share their experience with me and I can share my strength with them so we can share everything together. It makes me feel unwound and relaxed.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form 'chatting', not the infinitive 'to chatting'. Also, 'share my strength to them' should be 'share my strength with them' because 'share' is followed by 'with' when indicating the person receiving something. 'Make it feel unwind and relaxed' is incorrect; it should be 'It makes me feel unwound and relaxed' to have a proper subject and verb agreement and correct adjective forms.

× I usually chatting with friends topic about daily life and share some experience with work together. For example, if I have problem in workplace, I will share with them to discuss.

✓ I usually chat with friends about topics related to daily life and share some work experiences together. For example, if I have a problem in the workplace, I will share it with them to discuss.

The verb 'usually' should be followed by the base form 'chat', not 'chatting'. 'Topic about daily life' should be 'topics related to daily life' for clarity. 'Share some experience with work together' is awkward; it should be 'share some work experiences together'. 'If I have problem' needs an article: 'a problem'. 'Share with them to discuss' should be 'share it with them to discuss' to clarify the object.

× I prefer to chat with friends and with group because it's, uh, depend on situation. Sometime we need a private or priority thinking with that one friend, but sometimes we have to thinking like a.

✓ I prefer to chat with friends and with a group because it depends on the situation. Sometimes we need private or priority thinking with that one friend, but sometimes we have to think differently.

'Depend' should be 'depends' to agree with 'it'. 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'We have to thinking' should be 'we have to think' because 'have to' is followed by the base verb. 'With group' needs an article: 'with a group'. The sentence ending 'like a.' is incomplete and unclear, so it is corrected to 'think differently' for clarity.

× I prefer to communicate face to face. For me is a best way to communicate Chan clearly and I can ask anything with face to face I can get know that emotion and support it.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face. For me, it is the best way to communicate clearly and I can ask anything. With face to face communication, I can understand emotions and get support.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated or treated as an adverbial phrase; the sentence needed punctuation for clarity. 'For me is a best way' should be 'For me, it is the best way' to include the subject and article. 'Communicate Chan clearly' is unclear; 'communicate clearly' is correct. 'I can get know that emotion' should be 'I can understand emotions'. 'Support it' is vague; 'get support' is clearer.

× No I am. I am not argue with friend before I rarely to have conflict with Flynn. So if have anything different thinking we will discuss is not argued.

✓ No, I am not. I have not argued with friends before. I rarely have conflicts with Flynn. So if we have any different opinions, we discuss them; we do not argue.

'I am not argue' is incorrect; it should be 'I am not' or 'I do not argue'. 'I rarely to have' should be 'I rarely have'. 'If have anything different thinking' should be 'if we have any different opinions'. 'We will discuss is not argued' is incorrect; it should be 'we discuss them; we do not argue' to clarify meaning and correct verb forms.