Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时有语法错误和重复，如“our the weather”，且内容较为笼统，建议回答时注意语法准确，避免重复，并提供更具体的内容。

例: Yes, I definitely enjoy chatting with friends both online and offline. We often talk about the weather, current news, and interesting topics like cosmetics.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，且句子不完整，建议回答时注意句子完整性，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I usually chat about daily topics such as the weather in different cities like Chengdu and Shanghai, comparing them. We also discuss what to eat for breakfast, lunch, and dinner, so we always have plenty to talk about.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，如“They we can include a large topic”，建议注意语法和表达的准确性，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I like both. At parties or large gatherings, I enjoy chatting with many familiar people because we can cover a wide range of topics. However, when I speak one-on-one with a friend, I prefer deeper conversations.

提案: 回答较为自然，但有口头语“uh”，建议减少口头语，表达更流畅自然。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication whenever possible because it helps people feel closer. In contrast, social media creates some distance, making deep conversations more difficult.

提案: 回答中有重复和口头语，且表达不够流畅，建议减少重复和口头语，使用更准确的表达。

例: Sometimes, when we have different opinions, we discuss both sides and explain our reasons. However, we also try to see things from others' perspectives to understand each other better.

× We used to chat about our the weather or the news and some fascinating things like cosmetics and so on.

✓ We used to chat about the weather or the news and some fascinating things like cosmetics and so on.

句子中出现了重复的定冠词“our the”，应去掉“our”使句子通顺。

× I usually chat with them about some daily topics like the weather and the the weather in Chengdu, the weather in Shanghai and compare them and the food.

✓ I usually chat with them about some daily topics like the weather in Chengdu, the weather in Shanghai, and compare them and the food.

句子中“the the weather”重复，应去掉一个“the”。

× How about the what to eat in the morning, in the afternoon and in the evening.

✓ How about what to eat in the morning, in the afternoon, and in the evening.

“the what”搭配不正确，应去掉“the”使句子正确。

× So so we have a lot to talk about and.

✓ So, we have a lot to talk about.

句子中“and”后无内容，且“so so”重复，应删去多余部分使句子完整。

× They we can include a large topic, but when I speaking alone with a friend quite like to speak some deep.

✓ We can include a large topic, but when I speak alone with a friend, I quite like to speak about something deep.

“when I speaking”应为“when I speak”，动词应用原形；“speak some deep”表达不完整，应改为“speak about something deep”。

× I prefer face to face talk if possible because face to face talk can get, uh, get one another closer.

✓ I prefer face-to-face talk if possible because face-to-face talk can bring us closer.

“get one another closer”表达不自然，应改为“bring us closer”；“face to face”作为形容词应连写为“face-to-face”。

× But when we, when we talk, uh, via social media, we have some distance and we cannot have deeper conversations.

✓ But when we talk via social media, there is some distance and we cannot have deeper conversations.

“we have some distance”表达不准确，改为“there is some distance”更符合习惯用法。

× Sometimes when we have uh, conflicts in our opinions, we try to discuss both sides and uh choose choose our our side and explain it why.

✓ Sometimes when we have conflicts in our opinions, we try to discuss both sides and choose our side and explain why.

“choose choose our our side”重复，应去掉重复词；“explain it why”语序错误，应为“explain why”。

× But umm, sometimes we try to stand in others shoes so we can get to know each other better.

✓ But sometimes we try to stand in others' shoes so we can get to know each other better.

“others shoes”缺少所有格，应为“others' shoes”。