Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 시제 일관성과 문법 오류를 개선해야 합니다. 예를 들어, 'helped' 대신 'helps'를 사용하고, 'thought'는 복수형 'thoughts'로 수정하세요. 또한, 문장을 간결하게 하여 중복을 줄이세요.

例: Yes, definitely. I enjoy chatting with friends about our daily lives because it helps me unwind and relieve stress after long hours of studying. For example, after a day at school, sharing stories and thoughts with my friends makes me feel more relaxed and happy, which motivates me to keep going.

提案: 답변에 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'widely job topics'는 의미가 불분명하므로 제거하거나 수정하고, 동사 일치 오류('help' → 'helps', 'allowed' → 'allows')를 고치세요. 또한, 문장을 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 만드세요.

例: I usually chat with my friends about a wide range of topics, such as entertainment and current news. For example, we often discuss the latest movies or popular TV shows, and sometimes we talk about important events happening around the world. These conversations help us stay connected and allow us to share our opinions and learn from each other.

提案: 답변에 많은 오타와 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'paper chain'과 'just one brand'는 의미가 불분명하므로 'chat'과 'one friend'로 수정하세요. 'compatible' 대신 'comfortable'을 사용하고, 복수형과 단수형 일치를 확인하세요. 문장을 명확하고 자연스럽게 표현하세요.

例: I prefer to chat with just one friend because it feels more personal and comfortable. When I talk one-on-one, I can share my thoughts more openly and have deeper conversations. However, sometimes I enjoy chatting with groups as well since they are more lively, and I can hear different opinions from many people.

提案: 답변에 심각한 의미 전달 오류와 문법 문제가 있습니다. 'paste big conversation communication'과 'game person', 'software mission' 등의 표현은 부적절합니다. 질문에 맞게 'face-to-face'와 'social media'를 비교하며 명확하고 자연스럽게 답변하세요.

例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand the other person better through their facial expressions and body language. For example, when talking in person, I can pick up on subtle emotions that are often missed in social media chats. This makes the conversation feel more personal and meaningful.

提案: 전반적으로 좋은 답변이지만, 'expect'는 'respect'로 수정하고, 동사 일치('help' → 'helps')를 확인하세요. 또한, 문장을 조금 더 자연스럽고 명확하게 다듬으세요.

例: I don't often argue with my friends because we try to understand each other's opinions when we have different views. We talk openly and respect each other's feelings, which helps us maintain a good relationship. For example, if we disagree, we focus on solving the problems rather than blaming each other.

× I enjoy chatting with friends about our daily lives because it helped me unwind and relieve stress after long hours of studying.

✓ I enjoy chatting with friends about our daily lives because it helps me unwind and relieve stress after long hours of studying.

The sentence mixes present tense 'enjoy' with past tense 'helped'. To maintain tense consistency, 'helped' should be changed to present tense 'helps' because the action is habitual.

× sharing stories and thought with my friends make me feel more relaxed and happy, which motivates me to keep me going.

✓ sharing stories and thoughts with my friends makes me feel more relaxed and happy, which motivates me to keep me going.

'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts' to match 'stories'. Also, the verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'sharing stories and thoughts'.

× I usually chat with my friends about a wide range of issues, widely job topics such as entertainment and current news.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about a wide range of topics, including job topics such as entertainment and current news.

'Widely job topics' is incorrect. 'Including' is better to introduce examples. 'Wide range of topics' is the correct phrase.

× This conversation help us stay connected and allowed us share our opinion and learn from.

✓ These conversations help us stay connected and allow us to share our opinions and learn from each other.

'Conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match plural verbs. Verbs 'help' and 'allow' should agree with plural subject. 'Share' needs 'to' before it. 'Opinion' should be plural 'opinions'. 'Learn from' is incomplete; 'learn from each other' is correct.

× I do paper chain with just one brand because it builds more personal and compatible.

✓ I prefer chatting with just one friend because it builds a more personal and compatible relationship.

'Do paper chain' and 'one brand' are incorrect. The intended meaning is 'chatting with one friend'. Also, 'compatible' needs a noun to modify, such as 'relationship'.

× When I talk one-on-one, I can share my thoughts more openly and have deeper conversation.

✓ When I talk one-on-one, I can share my thoughts more openly and have a deeper conversation.

'Deeper conversation' needs an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× However, sometimes I enjoy chatting with group peoples as well since they are more lively and then I can hear different opinions from many people.

✓ However, sometimes I enjoy chatting with groups of people as well since they are livelier and then I can hear different opinions from many people.

'Group peoples' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'groups of people'. 'More lively' should be comparative 'livelier'.

× I definitely prefer to paste big conversation communication because it allows me to understand the other person better without their facial expression and body language.

✓ I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand the other person better through their facial expressions and body language.

'Paste big conversation communication' is incorrect. The intended phrase is 'face-to-face communication'. Also, 'without' should be 'through' to indicate means of understanding.

× For example, when talking in French to game person, I can pick up the software mission that are often missed in social media chats.

✓ For example, when talking in French to a game person, I can pick up the subtle meanings that are often missed in social media chats.

'Game person' is unclear; possibly 'native speaker' or 'gamer' is intended. 'Software mission' is incorrect; likely 'subtle meanings' is intended. Added article 'a' before 'game person'.

× I don't often argue with my friends because we try to understand each other's opinion only when we have different views.

✓ I don't often argue with my friends because we try to understand each other's opinions only when we have different views.

'Opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to match 'each other's'. The modal verb usage is correct here; the correction is for plural noun.

× We talk openly and expect each other's feeling, which help us maintain a good relationship.

✓ We talk openly and respect each other's feelings, which helps us maintain a good relationship.

'Expect' is incorrect; 'respect' fits the context better. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings'. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'which'.