Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more structured and clear by using complete sentences and avoiding filler words like 'uh'. Also, ensure subject pronouns are consistent and correct. For example, clarify who 'he' or 'she' refers to and avoid mixing them. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially during my free time. I usually talk to my best friend and share what has happened to me. If I have any problems, she often gives me advice and helps me find solutions.

提案: Focus on making your sentences grammatically correct and clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Be specific about the topics you discuss and avoid vague phrases. For example, mention specific subjects like clothes or technology and explain why you talk about them.

例: We usually chat about our personal problems and daily life. Sometimes, we also discuss topics like clothes or technology, especially if one of us has tried something new or has experience with it.

提案: Avoid filler sounds and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Also, maintain consistent pronouns and avoid repetition. For example, explain why chatting with one friend is better for understanding and support.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because we can understand each other better. When I talk to a single friend, they listen carefully and give me their honest opinion, which is more helpful than chatting in a group.

提案: Make your answer more coherent by using complete sentences and linking words. Clarify your ideas and avoid ambiguous pronouns. Explain why face-to-face communication is better with specific reasons.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face rather than via social media because in person, my friend can understand my feelings better. For example, she can tell if I am sad or happy, even if I don't say anything.

提案: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples of arguments. Avoid vague phrases like 'meeting your friend and I didn't like this'.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends. For instance, once I bought new clothes that my friend didn't like, but I really liked them, so I bought them anyway. We also argue occasionally about where to meet or what to do.

× Yes, I love chatting with my friend uh, special in free time.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends, especially in my free time.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because chatting usually involves more than one friend. Also, 'special' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'especially' to indicate preference or frequency.

× I start chatting with my best friend, uh, I, I tell him what happened with me and if she has any solution to solve my issue uh, she helps me or.

✓ I start chatting with my best friend, and I tell him what happened to me, and if he has any solution to solve my issue, he helps me.

The sentence mixes pronouns 'him' and 'she' incorrectly; it should be consistent. Also, 'happened with me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'happened to me'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Sometimes I think if I has or she has any problem in our life also we can chatting about something in you for clothes or technology if she try that or not has an experience for something.

✓ Sometimes I think if I have or she has any problem in our life, and we can chat about things like clothes or technology, whether she has tried that or has experience with something.

The verb 'has' is incorrect with 'I'; it should be 'have'. 'We can chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'we can chat'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct verb forms.

× I think I like chatting with UH-1 friend, uh, we can understand uh, uh, more when chatting together rather than group.

✓ I think I like chatting with one friend; we can understand each other more when chatting together rather than in a group.

The phrase 'UH-1 friend' is corrected to 'one friend'. 'Rather than group' needs the article 'a' before 'group'. Added 'each other' for clarity.

× Uh, also when chatting with one friend, you can help me more rather than group and she or she listen me and focus with me and. Give me a his opinion.

✓ Also, when chatting with one friend, they can help me more than a group, and they listen to me, focus on me, and give me their opinion.

Pronouns are inconsistent and incorrect; 'she or she' is replaced with 'they' for neutrality. 'Listen me' should be 'listen to me'. 'Give me a his opinion' is corrected to 'give me their opinion'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than social media because when I start talking she understand me and feeling me when I'm sad or happy or I didn't talk they she know if I have any depression or any.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because when I start talking, she understands me and can feel when I'm sad or happy, or if I don't talk, she knows if I have any depression or something.

'Rather than social media' should be 'rather than via social media' to indicate the medium. 'She understand' should be 'she understands'. 'Feeling me' is incorrect; 'can feel' is appropriate. 'I didn't talk they she know' is corrected to 'if I don't talk, she knows'.

× Yes, absolutely. I argue with my friend sometime when I buy some new clothes.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I argue with my friend sometimes when I buy some new clothes.

The adverb 'sometime' is incorrect here; it should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× She didn't like it, but I'm really like this so I buy it.

✓ She didn't like it, but I really like it, so I bought it.

'I'm really like this' is incorrect; it should be 'I really like it'. Also, since the action is in the past, 'buy' should be 'bought'.

× Also sometime when meeting your friend and I didn't like this.

✓ Also, sometimes when meeting my friend, and I don't like something.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' for frequency. 'Your friend' should be 'my friend' to maintain consistency. 'I didn't like this' is past tense; 'I don't like something' fits better in present tense context.