Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'chat with friends' twice in the same sentence. Try to add a linking phrase to explain why chatting makes you feel comfortable.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and feel at ease.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using a more natural phrase and adding a linking word to expand your answer.

例: I usually chat with my friends to get helpful advice about my studies, especially when I face difficulties.

提案: There are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use singular/plural correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because when many people give advice, it can be very helpful in life.

提案: Your answer is too long and repetitive. Avoid repeating 'communicate' and 'people/peoples'. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise.

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me to connect with others anytime and anywhere, which is very useful for my studies.

提案: There are grammatical mistakes and the answer lacks clarity. Use correct verb forms and explain how arguing helps you improve your knowledge with linking words.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends because it helps me improve my knowledge by considering different viewpoints.

× I usually chat with my friends for getting helpful advice for my studies.

✓ I usually chat with my friends to get helpful advice for my studies.

The phrase 'for getting' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to express purpose is 'to' followed by the base verb form. So, 'to get' is appropriate instead of 'for getting'.

× I also prefer to chat with group of peoples.

✓ I also prefer to chat with a group of people.

The word 'group' is singular and requires an article 'a'. Also, 'peoples' is incorrect in this context; the plural of 'person' is 'people' without 's'.

× When lot of people give you advices, it is very helpful in your life.

✓ When a lot of people give you advice, it is very helpful in your life.

The phrase should be 'a lot of' to quantify 'people'. Also, 'advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'advices'.

× I also prefer to communicate with people via social media because we can communicate with peoples at any time at any place through Internet or social media and it is very helpful for our studies and communication.

✓ I also prefer to communicate with people via social media because we can communicate with people at any time and any place through the Internet or social media, and it is very helpful for our studies and communication.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is already plural. Also, 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. Added 'and' for better sentence flow.

× I'm improve my knowledge.

✓ I improve my knowledge.

The phrase 'I'm improve' is incorrect because 'am' should be followed by a present participle (-ing form). Since 'improve' is a simple present action here, the correct form is 'I improve'.