Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp câu hợp lý để ý nghĩa rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it is enjoyable to talk and play games together, which makes me feel less lonely.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp từ. Hãy nói rõ chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện và cảm xúc của bạn khi trò chuyện. Sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily activities and share how we feel. It makes me very happy to talk with them.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ sở thích của mình và lý do. Sử dụng từ nối để câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: Usually, I prefer to chat with only one friend because I can have a deeper conversation. However, sometimes I enjoy chatting with a group for more fun.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết. Hãy giải thích lý do cụ thể và dùng từ phù hợp.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is more fun and exciting to play and talk with friends in person.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên giải thích lý do tại sao không thích tranh cãi và dùng từ phù hợp.

例: No, I don't like arguing with my friends because it creates a toxic atmosphere and makes me feel uncomfortable. I prefer to keep our friendship happy.

× I I like chatting with my friend because I can play and talk together in more fun and then being alone.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because I can play and talk together more fun than being alone.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with multiple people. Also, 'in more fun' is incorrect; it should be 'more fun than' to compare activities properly.

× I usually chat about with friends because I can talk about today with my friend and I very happy when chat with my chatting with my friend.

✓ I usually chat with friends because I can talk about my day with them, and I am very happy when chatting with my friends.

The phrase 'chat about with friends' is incorrect; it should be 'chat with friends'. Also, 'talk about today' is unclear; 'talk about my day' is more natural. The sentence also lacks proper verb forms and pronouns.

× Usually I like track only one friend umm and sometimes I can chat with my group because chat with one friend I can talk.

✓ Usually I like to chat with only one friend, and sometimes I chat with my group because chatting with one friend allows me to talk more.

The word 'track' is incorrect; it should be 'chat'. Also, 'my group' is better than 'my group' without article. The sentence structure is awkward and needs correction for clarity.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because we can play together and in fun. Uh, it was very exciting for me. I like playing.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because we can play together and have fun. It is very exciting for me. I like playing.

The phrase 'and in fun' is incorrect; it should be 'and have fun'. Also, 'it was very exciting' should be 'it is very exciting' to match present tense.

× No, I don't like argue with my friend is very toxic and very difficult for me. I like happy and I don't like you.

✓ No, I don't like to argue with my friends because it is very toxic and very difficult for me. I like being happy and I don't like conflict.

The phrase 'like argue' should be 'like to argue'. 'My friend is very toxic' is better as 'my friends because it is very toxic'. The last sentence 'I don't like you' is inappropriate and unclear; 'I don't like conflict' fits better.