Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'stay more collected' and 'share experience for each other'. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay connected and share our experiences. However, I also value spending time alone to relax and recharge.

提案: Your answer is too vague and lacks specific details. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and try to provide more precise examples. Also, use correct vocabulary, for example, 'televisions' should be 'TV shows'.

例: We usually talk about various topics, such as our daily activities, recent TV shows we've watched, and sometimes share jokes to lighten the mood.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but incomplete at the end. Make sure to finish your sentences fully. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations. In contrast, group chats can make it difficult to express my thoughts freely.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and is incomplete at the end. Avoid unnecessary prepositions like 'in' before 'chatting'. Also, complete your thoughts and use linking words to improve coherence.

例: I prefer communicating via social media because I sometimes feel shy sharing my true thoughts face-to-face. Online, I can express myself more freely without worrying about immediate reactions.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition ('over over') and awkward phrasing ('in a both interesting and respectful way'). Try to avoid repetition and use more natural expressions.

例: Yes, I often have friendly arguments with my friends about topics like movies or current events. We always share our opinions in a respectful and engaging manner.

× When I stay with my friends I like to chat with them because I find it can make us stay more collected and share experience for each other.

✓ When I stay with my friends, I like to chat with them because I find it helps us stay more collected and share experiences with each other.

The phrase 'I find it can make us stay more collected' is awkward and incorrect in present tense usage. 'Helps us stay' is a better present tense construction. Also, 'share experience for each other' is incorrect; it should be 'share experiences with each other' to correctly use plural and preposition.

× When I stay with my friends I like to chat with them because I find it can make us stay more collected and share experience for each other.

✓ When I stay with my friends, I like to chat with them because I find it helps us stay more collected and share experiences with each other.

The word 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' because it refers to multiple instances shared among friends.

× When I stay with my friends I like to chat with them because I find it can make us stay more collected and share experience for each other.

✓ When I stay with my friends, I like to chat with them because I find it helps us stay more collected and share experiences with each other.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to indicate mutual sharing is 'with'.

× But for most times I actually be alone as I find it can refresh and recharge myself.

✓ But most of the time, I am actually alone as I find it can refresh and recharge me.

The verb 'be' is incorrectly used in present tense; it should be 'am' for first person singular. Also, 'for most times' is incorrect; 'most of the time' is the correct phrase. 'Myself' should be replaced with 'me' as the object of 'recharge'.

× But for most times I actually be alone as I find it can refresh and recharge myself.

✓ But most of the time, I am actually alone as I find it can refresh and recharge me.

The phrase 'for most times' is incorrect; the correct preposition phrase is 'most of the time'.

× But for most times I actually be alone as I find it can refresh and recharge myself.

✓ But most of the time, I am actually alone as I find it can refresh and recharge me.

'Myself' is a reflexive pronoun and is incorrectly used here; the correct object pronoun is 'me'.

× Some small things or big things in my daily life, or just some jokes or umm, some televisions we have watched recently.

✓ Some small things or big things in my daily life, or just some jokes or, umm, some TV shows we have watched recently.

'Televisions' is incorrect in this context; the correct term is 'TV shows' or 'television programmes'. Also, a comma is needed after 'or' before 'umm' for clarity.

× I prefer chatting with just one friend because I find it easier to have a deeper and meaningful conversation.

✓ I prefer chatting with just one friend because I find it easier to have a deeper and more meaningful conversation.

The phrase 'deeper and meaningful' should be 'deeper and more meaningful' to correctly use parallel comparative adjectives.

× So with just.

✓ So, just with one friend.

The sentence 'So with just.' is incomplete and lacks clarity. It should be completed to convey the intended meaning.

× Actually, I prefer in chatting via social media with my friends because I often feel it a little bit embarrassed to share my true thoughts with them face to face.

✓ Actually, I prefer chatting via social media with my friends because I often feel a little bit embarrassed to share my true thoughts with them face to face.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'chatting'. Also, 'feel it a little bit embarrassed' is incorrect; it should be 'feel a little bit embarrassed'.

× Actually, I prefer in chatting via social media with my friends because I often feel it a little bit embarrassed to share my true thoughts with them face to face.

✓ Actually, I prefer chatting via social media with my friends because I often feel a little bit embarrassed to share my true thoughts with them face to face.

'It' is incorrectly used here; the correct structure is 'feel embarrassed' without 'it'.

× So this makes.

✓ So this makes it easier for me to express myself freely without worrying about immediate reactions.

The sentence 'So this makes.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be completed to explain what 'this' makes.

× Yes, I do often argue with my friends, but it's not a kind of serious fight.

✓ Yes, I often argue with my friends, but it's not a serious kind of fight.

The phrase 'do often argue' is awkward; 'often argue' is more natural. Also, 'a kind of serious fight' should be 'a serious kind of fight' for correct adjective order.

× We just exchange our different opinions over over a thing like a movie or current events in a both interesting and respectful way.

✓ We just exchange our different opinions over things like movies or current events in a way that is both interesting and respectful.

The phrase 'over over a thing' is incorrect and repetitive. Also, 'in a both interesting and respectful way' should be 'in a way that is both interesting and respectful' for correct conjunction and sentence structure.