Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, hãy nói "I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day and makes me happy."

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day and makes me feel happy.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn nói chuyện.

例: I usually chat with my friends about various topics, but mostly about education because we have many exams these days. We often share study materials and help each other understand difficult subjects.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về lợi ích khi trò chuyện nhóm như học hỏi và vui vẻ.

例: I prefer chatting in a group because it brings me happiness and many benefits. For example, I can learn from others' experiences on a topic, and I enjoy laughing together with everyone.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho lựa chọn của bạn.

例: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it is easier to convey messages clearly. In contrast, online communication can sometimes cause misunderstandings.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Bạn nên giải thích rõ nguyên nhân và kết quả của việc tranh luận với bạn bè.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because misunderstandings happen. However, after arguing, we understand each other better and share more.

× Yes, always, because while I'm chatting with friends is one of the way that I can recharge my batteries after a busy day.

✓ Yes, always, because chatting with friends is one of the ways that I can recharge my batteries after a busy day.

The phrase 'while I'm chatting with friends is one of the way' is incorrect because 'while' is unnecessary and 'one of the way' should be 'one of the ways'. Also, 'chatting' should be used as a gerund here to function as the subject of the sentence. The corrected sentence removes 'while' and uses 'chatting' as a gerund, and changes 'way' to plural 'ways' to agree with 'one of the'.

× I also they create me a lot of umm, happiness and joyful.

✓ They also create a lot of happiness and joy for me.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and adjectives. 'I also they create me' is incorrect; 'they' is the subject, and 'me' should be the object. Also, 'joyful' is an adjective, but the noun 'joy' is needed here. The corrected sentence properly places 'they' as subject, 'create' as verb, 'a lot of happiness and joy' as objects, and 'for me' to indicate the recipient.

× Oh, a lot in different topics, mostly about education, because nowadays we have a lot of examinations, so we share the papers and also the knowledge to each other.

✓ Oh, a lot of different topics, mostly about education, because nowadays we have a lot of examinations, so we share papers and also knowledge with each other.

The phrase 'a lot in different topics' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of different topics'. Also, 'the papers' and 'the knowledge' are better without 'the' here, and 'to each other' should be 'with each other' to indicate mutual sharing.

× Oh, I think that I like chatting in a group because it's bring me a lot of happiness and benefits.

✓ Oh, I think that I like chatting in a group because it brings me a lot of happiness and benefits.

The verb 'bring' should be in third person singular form 'brings' to agree with the subject 'it'.

× Umm when I'm trying to grow UPS, I can know more about other experiments in one topic and I like the laugh when all of of the people.

✓ Umm when I'm trying to grow up, I can learn more about other experiences in one topic and I like the laughter when all of the people laugh.

'grow UPS' is incorrect; it should be 'grow up'. 'know more about other experiments' is incorrect; 'learn more about other experiences' is appropriate. 'I like the laugh' should be 'I like the laughter' or 'I like it when everyone laughs'. Also, 'all of of the people' has a repeated 'of' and should be 'all of the people'.

× Oh, I will say that talking which each other in person is much better than on Internet because when we meet face to face we can convey the information effectively.

✓ Oh, I will say that talking with each other in person is much better than on the Internet because when we meet face to face we can convey information effectively.

The phrase 'talking which each other' is incorrect; it should be 'talking with each other'. Also, 'on Internet' should be 'on the Internet' because 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'. 'the information' can be 'information' as a general concept.

× In contrast, when we do it online we cannot convey all of the message you want to.

✓ In contrast, when we do it online, we cannot convey all of the messages you want to.

The phrase 'all of the message' is incorrect; it should be 'all of the messages' because 'all' refers to plural. Also, a comma after 'online' improves clarity.

× Yes, of it's like always because we cannot control of the agreements and the happens in a day.

✓ Yes, it's like always because we cannot control the disagreements and what happens in a day.

The phrase 'of it's like always' is incorrect; it should be 'it's like always'. 'control of the agreements' is incorrect; it should be 'control the disagreements' or 'control the arguments'. 'the happens' is incorrect; it should be 'what happens'. The modal verb 'cannot' is used correctly here.

× We have a lot of like misunderstandings.

✓ We have a lot of misunderstandings.

The word 'like' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'A lot of misunderstandings' is the correct phrase.

× So that is can be the reason lead to agreements.

✓ So that can be the reason leading to disagreements.

The sentence structure is incorrect. 'is can be' is wrong; it should be 'can be'. Also, 'lead to agreements' is likely intended to be 'lead to disagreements' given the context.

× But we after agreements we can know each other more and we can share more.

✓ But after disagreements, we can understand each other more and share more.

The sentence structure is awkward. 'But we after agreements' is incorrect; it should be 'But after disagreements'. 'know each other more' is better expressed as 'understand each other more'.