Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I'm very like' nên là 'I really like'. Bạn cũng nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như 'share with they them'. Hãy thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share various topics, such as my career, hobbies, and family life.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'which fan is about'. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Hạn chế sử dụng tiếng lắp và từ không cần thiết.

例: I usually talk about my career, job, and design ideas with my friends and boyfriend.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp như 'I prefer chat' nên là 'I prefer to chat' và 'it make me feel' nên là 'it makes me feel'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để tăng tính tự nhiên.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of about four people because it helps me feel connected and learn about their lives and interests.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không chính xác như 'connect to five to five' nên sửa thành 'face-to-face'. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face, but sometimes I use social media depending on whether we are free to meet or call.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít như 'friend' nên là 'friends'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Sometimes I argue with my friends, which is normal. However, because we are close, we always respect each other's differences and continue sharing.

× I'm very like chatting with friends.

✓ I really like chatting with friends.

The phrase 'I'm very like' is incorrect because 'like' is a verb and should not be used with 'am' in this way. Instead, use 'I really like' to express preference correctly.

× I can share with they them many topic in one day and just sharing about, uh, communication about career, about my hobby and my family too.

✓ I can share with them many topics in one day and just share about communication, about my career, my hobby, and my family too.

The pronouns 'they them' are incorrect; 'them' is the correct object pronoun here. Also, 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to match 'many'. The verb 'sharing' should be parallel with 'share' for consistency.

× I usually chat about which fan is about my career, my job, my idea for design and my umm umm conservation with my friend, my boyfriend and.

✓ I usually chat about things related to my career, my job, my ideas for design, and my conversations with my friend and my boyfriend.

The phrase 'which fan is about' is unclear and incorrect. 'Conservation' is a wrong word here; it should be 'conversation'. Prepositions and word choice need correction for clarity.

× For me I prefer chat with a group of people like 4 people because it make me feel connect with many friends and I know about they like what they live and what they do today and future just.

✓ For me, I prefer to chat with a group of about four people because it makes me feel connected with many friends and I know what they like, how they live, and what they do today and in the future.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to chat'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Connect' should be 'connected' as an adjective. 'They like what they live' is incorrect; it should be 'what they like' and 'how they live'. Also, 'future just' is incomplete and corrected to 'in the future'.

× For me, uh, I prefer to connect to five to five and sometime I prefer social media.

✓ For me, I prefer to connect face-to-face and sometimes I prefer social media.

The phrase 'connect to five to five' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'connect face-to-face'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency.

× It depends on what we free to meet or call, but I think, uh, everything is still good.

✓ It depends on whether we are free to meet or call, but I think everything is still good.

The phrase 'what we free to meet' is incorrect. It should be 'whether we are free to meet'. This corrects the sentence structure and preposition usage.

× Sometime I still argue with friend, just normal daily.

✓ Sometimes I still argue with friends, just normally every day.

The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. 'Just normal daily' is awkward and corrected to 'just normally every day'.

× Uh when we chatting together so much and we so close sometimes it makes situation is urgent.

✓ When we chat together a lot and we are so close, sometimes it makes the situation tense.

'When we chatting' should be 'when we chat' for correct verb form. 'It makes situation is urgent' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes the situation tense' or 'it creates tension'.

× But we still love sharing with each other and we respect the difference.

✓ But we still love sharing with each other and we respect the differences.

'The difference' should be plural 'the differences' to refer to various differences between people.