Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like chatting with friends?
受験者
Yes, actually I'm a very talkative person. I really enjoy the interaction with my friends no matter online or face to face. It's a good way to relax myself and enhance our relationship by communicating and check for something just for fun, no critical.
試験官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
受験者
Usually I chat some gossip in my working setting or my habit or my daily life. I will share some of my activities every week and also share my thoughts and my mind. Or we talk about the book we read recently and movie.
試験官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
受験者
I prefer to check with the only friend 'cause we can have more deeper talk, not only the simple greeting. Some describe talking in one in one by one conversation. We can think more carefully and talk deeper and share.
試験官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
受験者
For me, I pray for social media and it's more handy and in time compared to talking face to face. For me, I can contact all my friends from all over the world at any time zone. We can chat at any time also.
試験官
Do you argue with friends?
受験者
Yes I did. I argue a lot with my friends. I don't think it's a real fighting. It not means we don't have a good relationship. Actually every argument makes us tightly and we can know each other's thoughts, very real thoughts. So I don't, I don't.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
スコア: 70.0提案: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve grammar, for example, use 'whether online or face to face' instead of 'no matter online or face to face'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends a lot because it helps me relax and strengthen our relationships, whether online or face to face. We often share fun stories and catch up on each other's lives.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
スコア: 65.0提案: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' to organize your ideas. Be more specific and avoid vague phrases like 'my habit' or 'my mind'.
例: Usually, I chat about work gossip, my daily habits, and recent activities. For example, I often share what I did during the week and discuss books or movies we've recently enjoyed.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
スコア: 60.0提案: Focus on clear and grammatically correct sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to explain your preference. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases such as 'check with the only friend' and 'some describe talking in one in one by one conversation'.
例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because we can have deeper conversations instead of simple greetings. This one-on-one setting allows us to think carefully and share more meaningful thoughts.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
スコア: 65.0提案: Use correct expressions and avoid awkward phrases like 'I pray for social media'. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more concise. For example, say 'I prefer social media because it is more convenient and timely'.
例: I prefer communicating via social media because it is more convenient and allows me to contact friends worldwide at any time, regardless of time zones.
Do you argue with friends?
スコア: 55.0提案: Improve grammar and clarity. Use linking words like 'but' and 'because' to explain your ideas. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases such as 'makes us tightly' and 'So I don't, I don't'.
例: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes, but it's not serious fighting. In fact, arguments can strengthen our relationship because they help us understand each other's true thoughts better.
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