Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构的完整性和用词准确性，同时避免断断续续的表达。可以尝试用完整的句子表达你的观点，并且具体说明你喜欢和朋友聊天的原因。

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. After class, I usually play chess with them because it helps me relax. During our time together, I often share my travel experiences and happiness with them.

提案: 回答中存在词汇使用错误和表达不完整的问题，建议加强词汇的准确使用，并且用完整的句子表达你的想法。可以具体说明你和朋友聊的内容，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually talk with my friends about my studies and daily life. For example, I discuss which schools I like and share my thoughts about them.

提案: 回答表达较为混乱，存在语法和词汇错误，建议注意句子结构的完整性和逻辑性，使用正确的词汇表达你的偏好，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more comfortable and can trust them easily. Sometimes, when I have problems in my daily life, it is easier to share and get advice from a close friend rather than a group.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议注意句子连接和表达的清晰度。可以用更自然的表达方式说明你更喜欢通过社交媒体交流的原因。

例: I prefer to communicate via social media because it helps me feel more relaxed when talking to my friends online. I don't feel as nervous as I do in face-to-face conversations, and I find it easier to share my thoughts this way.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议用完整的句子表达观点，并且具体说明争吵的原因和你们如何处理分歧。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, we trust each other and try to resolve our disagreements peacefully.

× I usually. Like to chess with my friends after class because it's very relaxing for me.

✓ I usually like playing chess with my friends after class because it's very relaxing for me.

动词“like”后面应接动名词形式，表示喜欢做某事。这里应使用“playing”而不是“to chess”。

× I can shares my. Travel thing. To my friend and share. Other? Happiness, things with.

✓ I can share my travel experiences with my friends and share other happy things with them.

动词“share”应使用原形“share”，因为主语是“I”。“thing”应为复数“things”，因为指多个事物。

× I usually trust with my friend. About my studies and daily life.

✓ I usually trust my friend about my studies and daily life.

动词“trust”后不需要介词“with”，直接加宾语即可。

× For example, I often toss with them about what schools I like to read.

✓ For example, I often talk with them about which schools I like to attend.

“toss”用错，应为“talk”。“like to read”表达不当，应为“like to attend”或“like”。

× I prefer chatting with only one fence because I feel more comfortable and can trust them easily.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more comfortable and can trust them easily.

“fence”拼写错误，应为“friend”。

× Sometime when I have trouble them in my daily life, it's easier to share and get advice from just one close friends who rather than a group this way-stations.

✓ Sometimes when I have trouble in my daily life, it's easier to share and get advice from just one close friend rather than a group this way.

“Sometime”应为“Sometimes”。“trouble them”错误，应为“have trouble”。“friends”应为单数“friend”，因为指一个人。句子结构混乱，已调整。

× I prefer to communicate with social media because it has helped me feel more relaxed when I talk to my friends online, I don't feel as nervous as you. Face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because it has helped me feel more relaxed when I talk to my friends online; I don't feel as nervous as face-to-face communication.

“communicate with social media”应为“communicate via social media”。“Face to face”应作为名词短语，前面加“as”。

× Although I find it easier to trust and share my thoughts with them through social media platforms.

✓ Although I find it easier to trust and share my thoughts with my friends through social media platforms.

“them”指代不明，应明确为“my friends”。

× Yes, I do. But it is sometime occasion. In our relationships, because we.

✓ Yes, I do. But it is sometimes occasional in our relationship, because we.

“sometime”应为“sometimes”。“occasion”应为形容词“occasional”。“relationships”应为单数“relationship”，指双方关系。

× Sometimes have some different idea on our soul, so we should. Trust with each other.

✓ Sometimes we have some different ideas about our goals, so we should trust each other.

“idea on our soul”表达错误，应为“ideas about our goals”。“trust with each other”应为“trust each other”。