Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, đồng thời trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng. Hãy sử dụng các câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và đảm bảo ý nghĩa rõ ràng.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share my feelings and interesting stories. Sometimes, I talk with close friends about my experiences or things that make me feel scared or excited.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn nói.

例: I usually chat with my friends about my personal experiences and daily life. Moreover, when I talk with close friends, I feel comfortable sharing my secrets, which makes our conversations more meaningful and enjoyable.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc đúng để truyền đạt ý tưởng một cách hiệu quả. Hãy thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: If I have to choose, I prefer chatting with only one close friend because it feels more personal and comfortable. I can express my feelings openly, which helps me build a stronger connection with that person.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi nhỏ về số nhiều, chia động từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: To be honest, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can easily express my emotions and use gestures and body language to make my message clear. For example, when talking in person, I can see the other person's reactions and respond immediately, which makes the conversation more natural and effective.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và chia động từ đúng. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Cố gắng cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we chat online or on social media. This happens because it is harder to convey my message clearly without face-to-face interaction, which can lead to misunderstandings. For example, my emotions are not always expressed well through text, causing confusion and disagreements.

× Actually chatting is one of the most activities I like because I can express my emotion and tell them about the story or sometimes I start chatting with the close friend to tell them about the experiment and my my scare or something like that to sell.

✓ Actually chatting is one of the activities I like the most because I can express my emotions and tell them stories or sometimes I start chatting with a close friend to tell them about the experiment and my fears or something like that to share.

The phrase 'one of the most activities' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the activities I like the most' to properly use the superlative with a plural noun. Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context. 'The story' should be plural 'stories' as it refers to multiple stories. 'The close friend' should be 'a close friend' because it is not a specific known friend. 'My scare' is incorrect; it should be 'my fears' to express multiple concerns. 'To sell' is likely a typo or misuse; 'to share' fits the context better.

× I usually chat with my friends about my experiment or personal stories, basically whatever is happening in my life at the moment. Sometimes when I talk with a close friend, I feel comfortable sharing my secrets will make our conversation more meaningful and enjoyable to send me more fewer.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my experiments or personal stories, basically whatever is happening in my life at the moment. Sometimes when I talk with a close friend, I feel comfortable sharing my secrets, which makes our conversation more meaningful and enjoyable and helps me feel closer.

The sentence 'sharing my secrets will make our conversation more meaningful and enjoyable to send me more fewer' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'Will make' should be 'which makes' to connect the clause properly. 'To send me more fewer' is incorrect and unclear; it seems the intended meaning is 'helps me feel closer' or 'makes me feel better.' Also, 'experiment' should be plural 'experiments' to match the context.

× If I have to choose, I prefer chatting with only one friend, especially a close one, because it's feel more personal and comfortable.

✓ If I have to choose, I prefer chatting with only one friend, especially a close one, because it feels more personal and comfortable.

The phrase 'it's feel' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the singular subject 'it'. The correct form is 'it feels' (third person singular present tense).

× I can express my following openly and even confident about spirit that I would sell with others.

✓ I can express my feelings openly and even feel confident about the spirit that I would share with others.

'My following' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'my feelings'. 'Even confident' should be 'even feel confident' to include the verb. 'Spirit that I would sell with others' is incorrect; 'sell' should be 'share' to convey the intended meaning.

× This kind of one-on-one conversation helped me build a stronger connection.

✓ This kind of one-on-one conversation helps me build a stronger connection.

The question is about a general preference, so present tense is appropriate. 'Helped' is past tense; it should be 'helps' to indicate a habitual or general truth.

× To be honest, I prefer to communicate face to face because I can more easily express my emotion and use gesture and body language to make my message clear.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can more easily express my emotions and use gestures and body language to make my message clear.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb. 'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the context. 'Gesture' should be plural 'gestures' because it refers to multiple actions.

× For example, when talking in person, I can see the other person reaction and respond immediately.

✓ For example, when talking in person, I can see the other person's reaction and respond immediately.

'The other person reaction' is missing the possessive form; it should be 'the other person's reaction' to show possession.

× We make the conversation more natural and effectively.

✓ We make the conversation more natural and effective.

'Effectively' is an adverb, but the sentence requires an adjective to describe 'conversation'. Therefore, 'effective' is correct.

× With friends, yes, sometime argue with my friends especially when we chat online or on social media.

✓ With friends, yes, sometimes I argue with my friends especially when we chat online or on social media.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The sentence lacks the subject 'I' before 'argue'.

× This is because it is harder to convey my message clearly without face to face interaction.

✓ This is because it is harder to convey my message clearly without face-to-face interaction.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× We can lead to misunderstanding.

✓ It can lead to misunderstandings.

'We can lead to misunderstanding' is incorrect because 'we' is not the correct subject here; the situation leads to misunderstandings. Also, 'misunderstanding' should be plural 'misunderstandings' to indicate multiple instances.

× For example, sometimes my emotion are not expressed well through text and this cause confusion and disagreement.

✓ For example, sometimes my emotions are not expressed well through text and this causes confusion and disagreement.

'Emotion' should be plural 'emotions' to match the plural verb 'are'. 'Cause' should be 'causes' to agree with the singular subject 'this'.