Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“make me be happy and relax”应改为“make me happy and relaxed”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意时态和介词的正确使用。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me happy and relaxed. We can keep in touch and learn about what they have been doing recently, which helps strengthen our relationships. Therefore, I like to chat with my friends in my free time.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“like recently I really like to flying a kite”应为“recently, I really like flying a kite”，且“fly the cat”应为“fly the kite”。建议注意动词形式和拼写，表达要清晰具体。

例: I usually talk to my friends about what I am working on recently, such as my research or hobbies. For example, recently I have enjoyed flying kites, so I invited my friends to fly kites with me. Sometimes, we also talk about our boss.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，逻辑连接不顺畅。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意主谓一致和冠词使用，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows us to have a deeper conversation about our lives. In a group, everyone wants to speak, so there is less time for each person to talk.

提案: 回答中有严重语法和词汇错误，如“autonomous sphere is not this different”和“taste modalities”表达不当，且句子不完整。建议简化表达，使用准确词汇，确保句子完整且逻辑清晰。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because social media can cause misunderstandings. Seeing people's facial expressions and body language helps us understand them better.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议注意时态和主谓一致，使用连接词使句子更流畅，表达观点时要清晰具体。

例: Yes, but it happens very rarely. I believe that friends should communicate and tolerate each other instead of arguing. Without tolerance, our relationships might break down, which is not a good thing.

× Yes, I really like chatting with my friends since talking with my friends will make me be happy and relax.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with my friends since talking with my friends makes me happy and relaxed.

动词后面需要用正确的形式，'make me be happy and relax' 应改为 'makes me happy and relaxed'，因为 'make' 后面接形容词作宾语补足语，且主语是第三人称单数，动词要加 -s。

× Also we can get in touch with each other to know others information and what they are doing recently to make our relations more closely.

✓ Also we can get in touch with each other to know others' information and what they have been doing recently to make our relations closer.

'others information' 应为 'others' information' 表示所有格；'doing recently' 应用现在完成进行时 'have been doing recently'；'more closely' 应为形容词 'closer' 修饰 'relations'。

× So I very like to chatting with my friends in my free time.

✓ So I really like chatting with my friends in my free time.

'I very like to chatting' 结构错误，应为 'I really like chatting'，'like' 后接动名词形式，且 'very like' 不符合英语习惯，应使用 'really like'。

× Like recently I really like to flying a kite so I will told my friend to fly the cat with me together and also sometimes we were talking about our boss.

✓ Like recently I really like flying a kite so I told my friend to fly the kite with me together and sometimes we talk about our boss.

'like to flying' 应为 'like flying'；'will told' 时态错误，应为过去式 'told'；'fly the cat' 应为 'fly the kite'；'were talking' 应用一般现在时 'talk' 以符合习惯表达。

× Since are many one, everyone need to talk, so uh, each people will have less time to talk about.

✓ Since there are many people, everyone needs to talk, so each person will have less time to talk.

'are many one' 语法错误，应为 'there are many people'；'everyone need' 主谓不一致，应为 'everyone needs'；'each people' 错误，'each' 后应接单数名词 'person'。

× But if I just talk with one friends, I can have a very deeply talking with her.

✓ But if I just talk with one friend, I can have a very deep talk with her.

'one friends' 单复数错误，应为 'one friend'；'deeply talking' 结构错误，应为 'deep talk'，'deeply' 是副词，修饰动词，名词前应使用形容词 'deep'。

× I prefer to communicate face to face since by the social media the autonomous sphere is not this different and sometimes we were misunderstand others assaults through the text.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face since through social media the autonomous sphere is not that different and sometimes we misunderstand others' messages through text.

'by the social media' 应为 'through social media'；'this different' 应为 'that different'；'were misunderstand' 时态错误，应为 'misunderstand'；'others assaults' 词汇错误，应为 'others' messages'。

× So I think it's better to see other people face to face with their visual speech and taste modalities will help us understand their.

✓ So I think it's better to see other people face to face because their visual speech and other modalities will help us understand them.

'taste modalities' 词汇错误，应为 'other modalities'；'understand their' 不完整，应为 'understand them'。

× Yes, but it happen very seldom.

✓ Yes, but it happens very seldom.

主语是第三人称单数 'it'，动词应为第三人称单数形式 'happens'。

× Since I think we are friends or we don't need to argue, we can just communicate and talk with others.

✓ Because I think we are friends, so we don't need to argue; we can just communicate and talk with others.

'Since' 用法不当，改为 'Because'；'or' 连接句子不合适，改为 'so'；句子结构需要调整使逻辑更清晰。

× Because I say friends needs a bigger tolerance to others.

✓ Because I think friends need greater tolerance towards others.

'I say' 不合适，改为 'I think'；'friends needs' 主谓不一致，应为 'friends need'；'a bigger tolerance' 改为 'greater tolerance' 更自然；'to others' 改为 'towards others'。

× Lack of all our relationship will break out.

✓ Lack of tolerance will cause our relationship to break down.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，改为完整句子表达意思。

× I think it's not a good idea.

✓ I think it's not a good idea to argue.

句子不完整，补充内容使意思明确。