Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a more natural and coherent answer by avoiding contradictions and providing clear information. For example, if you don't have friends, explain that and mention what you do instead of chatting.

例: I enjoy chatting with friends, but currently I don't have many close friends to talk with. However, I like to communicate with my family members or classmates when I get the chance.

提案: Avoid repeating the same idea and try to answer directly with clear and natural sentences. If you don't have friends to chat with, you can mention what topics you would like to discuss if you had friends.

例: I don't usually chat with friends because I don't have many. But if I had friends, I would like to talk about school, hobbies, and daily life.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using better linking words and more natural expressions. Also, explain your reasons more smoothly.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group, it can be hard to trust everyone and sometimes people are not loyal. So, I feel more comfortable talking one-on-one.

提案: Try to organize your answer clearly and avoid unclear phrases. State your preference directly and explain why, using linking words for coherence.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal and I can see the other person's expressions. However, when family members are far away, I use social media to stay in touch.

提案: Make your answer clearer and more natural by directly answering the question and explaining your behavior in arguments with friends.

例: Sometimes I argue with my friends, but if I don't want to continue the debate, I usually agree with them to keep the peace.

× I like chatting with friends, but I don't have friends.

✓ I like chatting with friends, but I don't have any friends.

The original sentence is grammatically correct but sounds incomplete without 'any' before 'friends' when negating possession. Adding 'any' clarifies the negation and improves naturalness.

× many of my my friends are limited to with chat with me, so I don't have any.

✓ many of my friends are limited to chatting with me, so I don't have any.

The phrase 'limited to with chat with me' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' followed by a gerund verb form 'chatting'. Also, the repeated word 'my' is a typographical error.

× Additionally, I don't have friends.

✓ Additionally, I don't have any friends.

When negating possession of countable nouns like 'friends', it is natural to use 'any' before the plural noun to indicate none.

× in a group of people may cause not trust and not loyalty.

✓ being in a group of people may cause lack of trust and loyalty.

The phrase 'may cause not trust and not loyalty' is ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'may cause lack of trust and loyalty'. Also, 'being in a group' is clearer than 'in a group' alone.

× That's why I prefer with 1 friend.

✓ That's why I prefer to chat with one friend.

The phrase 'prefer with 1 friend' is incorrect. The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' plus the verb or 'to chat with'. Also, '1' should be written as 'one' in formal writing.

× I prepare to culminate face to face because, uh, sometimes in long distance family or communicate may communicate with face to face or via social media and it's easy to look at face your or.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because, sometimes with long-distance family, communication can be face to face or via social media, and it's easier to see your face.

The original sentence has multiple errors: 'prepare to culminate' should be 'prefer to communicate'; 'in long distance family' should be 'with long-distance family'; 'may communicate with face to face' is incorrect; 'look at face your or' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning and corrects prepositions and verb usage.

× Yes hi girls, my friend does.

✓ Yes, my friend does.

The phrase 'hi girls' is irrelevant and confusing in this context. Removing it clarifies the sentence. Also, 'my friend does' correctly answers the question.

× When I am not interested in them like debate then I will agree with my friends.

✓ When I am not interested in debating with them, I will agree with my friends.

The phrase 'not interested in them like debate' is incorrect. It should be 'not interested in debating with them'. Also, the conjunction 'then' is unnecessary and can be omitted for smoother flow.