Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但部分句子略显重复，建议避免冗余表达，提升语言简洁性。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they support me when I'm feeling down by offering advice and encouragement, which helps me feel more positive.

提案: 语法错误较多，如单复数和冠词使用不当，且表达不够连贯，建议加强语法准确性和使用连接词。

例: We usually talk about personal problems because when I'm upset, I prefer chatting with someone who can give me experienced advice, which helps me feel less stressed.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，建议注意单复数和句子完整性，同时使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

例: It depends on the topic. For serious and private issues, I prefer chatting with one friend to keep things confidential. However, for casual topics, I enjoy group chats because they offer diverse advice.

提案: 表达基本清晰，但存在用词错误（如“her voice of town”），建议注意词汇准确性和表达自然性。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can use body language and facial expressions to express myself clearly, and it's easier to understand others through their tone and gestures.

提案: 回答内容较好，但最后一句表达不完整且用词不当，建议注意句子完整性和词汇准确性。

例: Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends when we have different opinions. However, we usually reflect on the disagreement and try to understand each other's views, which helps maintain our strong relationship.

× Most of our topics is about personal problems because when I feel upset or down, I prefer chatting with one people who can give me experienced advice and encouragement.

✓ Most of our topics are about personal problems because when I feel upset or down, I prefer chatting with one person who can give me experienced advice and encouragement.

这里的主语是复数形式“topics”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”，而不是“is”。另外，“one people”是不正确的，应该用单数“one person”。

× If the problem is serious and private, I prefer to chat with one people because I don't want much people know about my personal life.

✓ If the problem is serious and private, I prefer to chat with one person because I don't want many people to know about my personal life.

“one people”应改为单数“one person”。“much people”应改为复数“many people”，因为“people”是可数名词。

× But if it's a just too casual and small thing, I enjoy chatting with a group of people because they can provide me with experience, advice and.

✓ But if it's just a too casual and small thing, I enjoy chatting with a group of people because they can provide me with experience and advice.

句子结构不完整，缺少“and”后面的内容。应去掉“a”并调整词序为“just a too casual and small thing”，但更自然的表达是“just a casual and small thing”。此外，列举时“experience, advice and”后面应有完整内容或去掉“and”。

× I prefer to have a face to face communication because I can use my body language and facial expressions to better express myself.

✓ I prefer to have face-to-face communication because I can use my body language and facial expressions to better express myself.

“face to face”作为形容词时应连字符连接，且“communication”前不需要冠词“a”。

× Moreover, I think when I communicate with the people, I can easily get what they are talking about from her voice of town and gestures.

✓ Moreover, I think when I communicate with people, I can easily understand what they are talking about from their tone of voice and gestures.

“the people”应改为“people”，更自然；“her voice of town”应为“their tone of voice”，且“tone”拼写错误。

× Yes, I do occasionally argue with my friends actually, especially when we have different opinions.

✓ Yes, I do occasionally argue with my friends, actually, especially when we have different opinions.

“actually”应用逗号隔开，放在句中更自然。

× This helps us resolve complex and maintain a strong relationship.

✓ This helps us resolve conflicts and maintain a strong relationship.

“resolve complex”不完整，应为“resolve conflicts”，意思是解决冲突。