Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và hiệu quả, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn hơn để tăng tính mạch lạc. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng thêm từ nối để liên kết các ý rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. Moreover, I can get advice from them, which is very helpful.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ và có ví dụ cụ thể, tuy nhiên nên chú ý sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như 'give update' nên là 'give updates'.

例: We usually talk about our personal lives and studies. For instance, my friends often share stories about their dogs, which helps us stay connected and support each other.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ 'it's allowed me' nên là 'it allows me'), và dùng số nhiều đúng (perspectives). Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to hear various perspectives and discuss many topics. Furthermore, the conversation flows naturally, keeping it interesting and lively.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, ví dụ 'it's allowed me' nên là 'it allows me', 'other person' nên là 'other person's', và câu cuối nên chỉnh lại để rõ nghĩa hơn. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to observe the other person's body language and facial expressions, which help me understand emotions better. For example, I can notice subtle clues like tone of voice or gestures that are often missing in social media conversations.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ 'group settings' nên là 'group settings', 'different perspective' nên là 'different perspectives', câu cuối chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên luyện tập cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, but it doesn't happen often, especially in group settings. Usually, we disagree because we have different perspectives on certain topics. For example, sometimes we argue about what activities to do when we hang out, but these disagreements are usually friendly.

× my friends often share stories about their dogs and give update on what happened in their lives

✓ my friends often share stories about their dogs and give updates on what happened in their lives

The noun 'update' should be plural 'updates' because it refers to multiple pieces of information. Using the plural form correctly matches the context of multiple updates being shared.

× it's allowed me to hear various perspective and discuss a wide range of topics

✓ it has allowed me to hear various perspectives and discuss a wide range of topics

The phrase 'it's allowed' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'it has allowed' to indicate present perfect tense. Also, 'perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' to agree with 'various'.

× I enjoy how the conversation flow naturally and how the subjects often change, which keep the discussion interesting and lively

✓ I enjoy how the conversation flows naturally and how the subjects often change, which keeps the discussion interesting and lively

Subject-verb agreement requires 'conversation' to be followed by 'flows' (third person singular). Similarly, 'which' refers to 'the discussion' (singular), so 'keep' should be 'keeps'.

× Additionally, talking in a group of friends helped me learn new ideas and improve my communication

✓ Additionally, talking in a group of friends helps me learn new ideas and improve my communication

The present tense 'helps' is more appropriate here to express a general truth or habitual action rather than a past event.

× it's allowed me to observe other person body language and facial expression would help me understand the emotion better

✓ it has allowed me to observe other people's body language and facial expressions which help me understand the emotions better

'It's allowed' should be 'it has allowed' for present perfect tense. 'Other person' should be 'other people's' to show possession and plural. 'Facial expression' should be plural 'facial expressions' to match 'body language'. 'Would help' should be 'help' to maintain present tense and agreement.

× when talking directly, I can notice a subtle clue like tones of voice or gesture that often miss in social media conversation

✓ when talking directly, I can notice subtle clues like tones of voice or gestures that are often missed in social media conversations

'A subtle clue' should be plural 'subtle clues' to match 'tones' and 'gestures'. 'Miss' should be 'are missed' to form passive voice. 'Social media conversation' should be plural 'social media conversations'.

× These non-vocal signals are communication more effective

✓ These non-vocal signals make communication more effective

The sentence lacks a proper verb; 'are communication more effective' is incorrect. The correct form is 'make communication more effective' to express causation.

× this doesn't happen very often, especially in a group settings

✓ this doesn't happen very often, especially in group settings

'A group settings' is incorrect because 'settings' is plural; the article 'a' should be removed to match plural noun.

× Usually we disagree because we have different perspective on certain topics

✓ Usually we disagree because we have different perspectives on certain topics

'Perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' to agree with 'different' and the plural noun 'topics'.

× sometimes we argue about what activity you we do when we hang out

✓ sometimes we argue about what activity we do when we hang out

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly inserted; it should be removed to maintain correct subject pronoun 'we'.

× But these disagreements usually friendly and

✓ But these disagreements are usually friendly

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the verb 'are' to link subject and adjective. The corrected sentence completes the thought properly.