Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add clear supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it energizes me and helps me stay connected. Moreover, talking with friends allows me to exchange ideas and strengthen our relationships, which is important to me as a social person.

提案: Your answer covers relevant topics but ends abruptly and lacks linking words. Try to complete your thoughts and use connectors to make your answer coherent and natural.

例: I usually chat with friends about past events we shared, and sometimes we discuss future plans like marriages or other personal matters. Additionally, I often share my frustrations about work to get their advice or support.

提案: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid confusing expressions.

例: I prefer chatting with a single friend because they can focus better on the conversation. In contrast, group chats can be distracting since many people are involved, making it harder to concentrate.

提案: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and has some hesitation. Try to finish your sentences clearly and use linking words to explain your reasons effectively.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see the other person's facial expressions and emotions. On the other hand, social media sometimes lacks this emotional connection, which can lead to misunderstandings.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear opinion first, then explain with specific examples using linking words. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, especially when discussing controversial topics. However, I believe that arguing can help us understand different viewpoints and improve our opinions.

× Yeah, I'd really like to chat with friends as if you could give this more kind of energy and it helps you to socialize throughout with your friends.

✓ Yeah, I'd really like to chat with friends as it could give more energy and help you to socialize with your friends.

The phrase 'as if you could give this more kind of energy' is incorrect because 'as if' is used to express hypothetical situations and is not appropriate here. Instead, 'as it could give more energy' correctly expresses the reason. Also, 'throughout with your friends' is incorrect; 'with your friends' suffices. The verb form 'helps' is changed to 'help' to agree with the subject 'it'.

× Starting with friends also help you to get more ideas and keeping up the relationship is very important as I am a social person I like to keep.

✓ Starting with friends also helps you to get more ideas, and keeping up relationships is very important as I am a social person and like to keep them.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'Starting'. 'Keeping up the relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to match the general meaning. Also, the sentence is run-on and needs proper conjunctions and pronouns for clarity.

× Yeah, with friends I might chat regarding the past events we had together.

✓ Yeah, with friends I usually chat about the past events we had together.

The modal verb 'might' suggests possibility but here the speaker is describing a habitual action, so 'usually chat' is more appropriate to express regular activity.

× Sometimes we might also discuss the future events like marriages and other kind of personal things.

✓ Sometimes we also discuss future events like marriages and other kinds of personal things.

Again, 'might' implies possibility, but the speaker is describing what they do sometimes, so 'also discuss' is better. 'Other kind' should be plural 'other kinds' to agree with plural 'things'.

× Sometimes I might share my frustrations in my job or.

✓ Sometimes I share my frustrations about my job.

The modal 'might' is unnecessary here; simple present 'share' is better for habitual action. 'In my job' should be 'about my job' to correctly express the topic of frustration. The sentence was incomplete and is corrected accordingly.

× Yeah, I prefer to chat mostly with a single friend as he can mostly concentrate on my boats rather than with a group because when we are in a group they might get distracted easily because there are a lot of people around them.

✓ Yeah, I prefer to chat mostly with a single friend as he can mostly concentrate on my points rather than with a group because when we are in a group, they might get distracted easily because there are a lot of people around them.

The word 'boats' is a mishearing or typo; it should be 'points'. The rest of the sentence is grammatically correct.

× So talk me through a person is always better.

✓ So talking to one person is always better.

The phrase 'talk me through a person' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'talking to one person'. Also, 'talking' is the gerund form used as the subject here.

× Uh, face to face communication is always better than social media as we can see the face of a person and capture the emotions that is actually going through his mind.

✓ Uh, face-to-face communication is always better than social media as we can see a person's face and capture the emotions that are actually going through their mind.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'The face of a person' is better expressed as 'a person's face'. 'Emotions that is' should be 'emotions that are' to agree in number. 'His mind' is better as 'their mind' for gender neutrality.

× If we are in that state, uh, sometimes in social media we might not be able to.

✓ If we are in that state, sometimes on social media we might not be able to express ourselves properly.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'express ourselves properly' completes the thought. Also, 'in social media' should be 'on social media'.

× Yeah, sometimes, uh, but not always. Arguing makes you more good in something.

✓ Yeah, sometimes, but not always. Arguing makes you better at something.

'More good' is incorrect; the correct comparative form is 'better'. The sentence is split properly for clarity.

× For example, if we have a certain subject that is quite controversial, it will be having arguments rather than.

✓ For example, if we have a certain subject that is quite controversial, there will be arguments rather than agreement.

'It will be having arguments' is incorrect; the correct form is 'there will be arguments'. The sentence was incomplete and is completed with 'rather than agreement' for clarity.