Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为混乱，且有重复和多余的词汇。建议简化句子结构，避免口头语“umm”，并使用更自然流畅的表达。

例: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and talk about topics we are interested in. It cheers me up and recharges me for the upcoming week.

提案: 回答内容不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达重复且不连贯。建议使用更准确的句子结构，明确表达聊天内容，并避免重复和口头语。

例: We usually chat about our school life because we attend different schools and don't have much time to meet. So, we use social media to share our experiences.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和重复。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用连贯的表达方式。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because groups make me nervous, and I can't express myself freely. With one friend, I feel comfortable to say whatever I want.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复和口头语，使回答更自然流畅。

例: I prefer communicating via social media because I don't have to face people directly. It allows me to express myself more freely and feel relaxed.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，表达观点更清晰。

例: Yes, it's hard to avoid arguments with friends. However, we always talk about our problems and solve them quickly. I think arguing can be a good thing if handled properly.

× chatting with my friends always make me relax and talk about something UMM we are really interested in

✓ chatting with my friends always makes me relax and talk about something we are really interested in

主语是单数形式的动名词短语，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes。

× will promote my will, cheer me up and recharge myself and to be ready for the next coming week

✓ will promote my will, cheer me up, recharge myself and be ready for the next coming week

并列动词应保持一致，去掉多余的to，使结构平行。

× We usually chat about our interesting being in school cause most of the time umm we were in schools uh in different school and don't have much time to umm play with each other

✓ We usually chat about our interesting experiences in school because most of the time we are in different schools and don't have much time to play with each other

介词使用错误，'being'应改为名词'experiences'，'cause'应改为正式连词'because'，'were'应改为现在时态'are'，'schools uh in different school'应改为复数形式'different schools'。

× in schools uh in different school

✓ in different schools

复数和单数不一致，应统一为复数形式。

× so we often chat on on some social media to talk about our various experience

✓ so we often chat on some social media to talk about our various experiences

重复介词'on on'应改为单个'on'，'experience'应为复数形式'experiences'。

× our various experience

✓ our various experiences

'experience'应为复数形式以匹配'various'。

× a group of people usually make my make myself nervous

✓ a group of people usually makes me nervous

主语是单数短语'a group of people'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式'makes'，'make myself nervous'应改为'makes me nervous'。

× make my make myself nervous

✓ makes me nervous

'make my make myself'重复且错误，正确用法是'makes me nervous'。

× I don't. I don't tend to say whatever I like and but with only one friend I can say whatever I want and express

✓ I don't tend to say whatever I like, but with only one friend I can say whatever I want and express myself

句子中'and but'重复且不合适，应去掉'and'，并补充'reflexive pronoun' myself。

× and express

✓ and express myself

动词'express'后应接反身代词'myself'以表达完整意思。

× I prefer to communicate on via social media accounts

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media accounts

介词'on'和'via'重复，保留'via'即可。

× We don't have to face people. Communicate people face to face

✓ We don't have to face people or communicate with people face to face

缺少介词'with'，且句子结构不完整，应合并并补充介词。

× communicate people face to face

✓ communicate with people face to face

动词'communicate'后应加介词'with'。

× talk about our problems and solve it on immediately

✓ talk about our problems and solve them immediately

'solve'后应接复数宾语'them'，'on'多余，应去掉。

× we have a argument

✓ we have an argument

冠词使用错误，'argument'以元音音素开头，应使用'an'。

× it's hard not to argue with friends anymore

✓ it's hard to avoid arguing with friends nowadays

'hard not to argue'表达不自然，建议改为'hard to avoid arguing'，'anymore'改为'nowadays'更合适。

× So in not just like a harmful thing, but a very good thing

✓ So it is not just a harmful thing, but a very good thing

句子缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。