Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to be more concise and clear by directly stating why you like chatting with friends, and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and boosts my confidence by allowing me to share my thoughts and feelings openly.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words to connect your points. Be specific about the topics you discuss.

例: I usually chat with my friend about our personal lives; for example, she often shares recent events, and I talk about college politics, especially since I am part of the SAT team.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be clearer. Try to avoid repeating the same ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, explain why chatting with one friend is better for you.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because we share everything openly, which builds my confidence and trust. This one-on-one interaction helps us understand each other better.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and adding linking words to enhance coherence. Also, briefly explain why face-to-face communication is better for you.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for one-on-one interaction, which helps build trust and a deeper connection with the person I'm talking to.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas logically and use linking words to explain why you argue with your friends. Be specific about the reasons.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when they don't listen to my suggestions about how to complete a project, or when we tease each other playfully.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it gives me relief and and kind of confidence where I lack and by chatting with my friends it gets gives me where I'm lacking.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it gives me relief and a kind of confidence where I lack, and by chatting with my friends, it gives me what I'm lacking.

The sentence contains repeated conjunction 'and' and awkward phrasing 'it gets gives me where I'm lacking'. The correction removes the repeated 'and', adds the article 'a' before 'kind of confidence', and rephrases to 'it gives me what I'm lacking' for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually talk to my friend regarding a personal lives where my friend she shares me everything that has been has done day before yesterday with her and I chat with her the politics of my college where I'm included on SAT set of team.

✓ I usually talk to my friend about personal lives where my friend shares with me everything that happened the day before yesterday, and I chat with her about the politics of my college where I'm included in the SAT set team.

The sentence misuses prepositions such as 'regarding' instead of 'about', 'shares me' instead of 'shares with me', and 'included on' instead of 'included in'. Also, 'a personal lives' is incorrect; 'personal lives' is plural and does not need 'a'. The correction fixes these prepositions and improves sentence clarity.

× I usually talk to my friend regarding a personal lives where my friend she shares me everything that has been has done day before yesterday with her and I chat with her the politics of my college where I'm included on SAT set of team.

✓ I usually talk to my friend about personal lives where my friend shares with me everything that happened the day before yesterday, and I chat with her about the politics of my college where I'm included in the SAT set team.

The phrase 'my friend she' is redundant; 'my friend' alone suffices. Also, 'shares me' is incorrect; the correct form is 'shares with me'. The correction removes redundancy and corrects pronoun usage.

× I chat with her the politics of my college where I'm included on SAT set of team.

✓ I chat with her about the politics of my college where I'm included in the SAT set team.

The phrase 'chat with her the politics' lacks the preposition 'about'. Also, 'included on' should be 'included in'. The correction adds 'about' and changes 'on' to 'in' for correct prepositional use.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because she is my dearest friend. She also shares with me everything and I also share with her everything where this gives me confidence and a sense of reliance. Reliance where I get to know each other, we get to know each other.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because she is my dearest friend. She also shares everything with me, and I also share everything with her, which gives me confidence and a sense of reliance. Through reliance, we get to know each other.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect pronoun use such as 'shares with me everything' instead of 'shares everything with me'. The phrase 'Reliance where I get to know each other' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction improves pronoun placement and clarifies meaning.

× I prefer face to face communication because it helps gives me a kind of one-on-one interaction where help to build trust and deeper connection with the person I'm talking to.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps give me a kind of one-on-one interaction that helps build trust and a deeper connection with the person I'm talking to.

The phrase 'helps gives me' is incorrect; it should be 'helps give me'. Also, 'where help to build' is ungrammatical; it should be 'that helps build'. The correction fixes verb forms and prepositional phrases for clarity.

× Yes, I do argue with my friends because mostly they don't listen to me where they should do that particular thing in a particular way where the project like anything regarding project or making fun of each other.

✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends because mostly they don't listen to me when they should do a particular thing in a particular way, like in a project or when making fun of each other.

The original sentence misuses 'where' instead of 'when' and lacks articles before 'project'. The correction replaces 'where' with 'when' and adds articles for grammatical correctness.