Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำให้ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้ 'helps' แทน 'help' และ 'ideas' แทน 'idea' รวมถึงปรับประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น และหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน

例: Yes, I do because chatting with friends helps me feel relaxed and less stressed. Moreover, we can share our ideas with each other, which is very enjoyable.

提案: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจนและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำ เช่น ไม่ต้องพูด 'anything' ซ้ำ และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

例: We usually chat about anything that happened during the day. For example, if we watch a movie together, we share our thoughts and opinions about it.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'not good at a group' ควรเป็น 'not good in groups' และใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมเพื่อความชัดเจน

例: Personally, I'm not comfortable in groups, so I prefer talking one-on-one with a close friend. This way, I can have deeper and more meaningful conversations.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ เช่น 'social media is popular and used by many people' และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

例: Social media is very popular and used by many people nowadays. I prefer it because I can stay at home and still chat with my friends as if we were talking face-to-face.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงความชัดเจนของประโยคและหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น 'thank you' ที่ไม่เหมาะสมในบริบทนี้ และใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง

例: Yes, sometimes we argue, but it's more about sharing our own ideas and opinions rather than fighting. We respect each other's thoughts and discuss them together.

× Yes I do because it's help me feel relax or less stressful and we can share each other idea together.

✓ Yes I do because it helps me feel relaxed or less stressed and we can share ideas with each other.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the subject 'it'. 'Relax' and 'stressful' should be in adjective forms 'relaxed' and 'stressed' to describe feelings. 'Share each other idea' is incorrect; it should be 'share ideas with each other' to correctly express mutual sharing.

× It can be anything, anything that happened during your day.

✓ It can be anything, anything that happens during your day.

The phrase 'happened' is past tense, but since the question is about usual topics, present tense 'happens' is appropriate to indicate habitual actions.

× Or if we watch something similar together, we can share your thought about it, such as like a movie, if we watch the movie and we can share our own thought about the movie.

✓ Or if we watch something similar together, we can share our thoughts about it, such as a movie; if we watch the movie, we can share our own thoughts about it.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect here because the speaker is including themselves and others; 'our' is correct. 'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts' to match the context. Also, 'such as like' is redundant; 'such as' alone is sufficient.

× For me personally, I'm not good at a group of people, but I prefer to talk one-on-one with my close friend.

✓ For me personally, I'm not good in a group of people, but I prefer to talk one-on-one with my close friend.

The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to being part of a group. 'Good at' is used for skills or activities, not for being in a group.

× Thus I can talk deeper and a lot more with just only someone.

✓ Thus I can talk more deeply and a lot more with just one person.

'Talk deeper' should be 'talk more deeply' to use the adverb form. 'Just only someone' is incorrect; 'just one person' is the proper quantifier and noun.

× Now the social media is popular and use quite a lot from so many people.

✓ Now social media is popular and used quite a lot by many people.

'Use quite a lot from so many people' is incorrect. The correct passive form is 'used quite a lot by many people'. Also, 'the social media' should be 'social media' without 'the'.

× I think I prefer this social media because I can stay at my own place and still chat with my friend just like we talk on face to face.

✓ I think I prefer social media because I can stay at my own place and still chat with my friends just like we talk face to face.

'This social media' is unnatural; 'social media' is uncountable and does not need 'this'. 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match general usage. 'Talk on face to face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'talk face to face'.

× Sure, it's more like a share your own idea more than thank you because, umm, we have our own idea, our own thoughts, so we can share it together.

✓ Sure, it's more like sharing your own ideas rather than arguing because, umm, we have our own ideas, our own thoughts, so we can share them together.

'More like a share your own idea more than thank you' is unclear and incorrect. 'Sharing your own ideas rather than arguing' is clearer and grammatically correct. Also, 'share it together' should be 'share them together' to agree with plural 'ideas'.