Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and repeating words. Also, use correct grammar such as 'I feel like they can make me relax' instead of 'make myself relax'. Keep your answer concise and clear.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I'm feeling down because talking to them helps me relax and improve my mood.

提案: Avoid filler words and be more specific. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say 'We usually talk about our hobbies, such as skiing and keeping pets, and sometimes we plan trips together.'

例: We usually chat about our hobbies, like skiing and taking care of pets, and we often plan trips or outings together.

提案: Try to use correct grammar and avoid filler words. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, 'I prefer chatting with one close friend because I feel more natural and comfortable. My social skills are not very strong, so I don't enjoy talking with large groups.'

例: I prefer chatting with one close friend because I feel more natural and comfortable. Since my social skills are not very strong, I don't enjoy talking with large groups of people.

提案: Improve fluency by reducing filler words and use clearer sentence structures. Use linking words to contrast your preferences. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication with good friends because it feels more personal; however, for teachers or strangers, I find social media more convenient.'

例: I prefer face-to-face communication with good friends because it feels more personal; however, for teachers or strangers, I find social media more convenient.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response with reasons and use linking words. For example, 'I rarely argue with my friends because I prefer to avoid conflicts. Sometimes disagreements happen, but I try to stay calm and understand their point of view.'

例: I rarely argue with my friends because I prefer to avoid conflicts. Sometimes disagreements happen, but I try to stay calm and understand their point of view.

× Yes of course, I really love chatting with my friends, especially when I was down.

✓ Yes of course, I really love chatting with my friends, especially when I am down.

The sentence refers to a habitual action or general state, so the present tense 'am' should be used instead of the past tense 'was'. Using 'was' implies a specific past event, which does not fit the context.

× I feel like they can make myself relax when when I talk to them.

✓ I feel like they can make me relax when I talk to them.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used here. The correct object pronoun 'me' should be used after 'make' to indicate the person being affected.

× I feel like talking about our own umm, hobbies like skiing or like uh uh, keeping a pet or umm, we were planning to go somewhere.

✓ I feel like talking about our own umm, hobbies like skiing or like uh uh, keeping a pet or umm, we are planning to go somewhere.

The phrase 'we were planning' suggests a past action, but the context implies a current or future plan, so the present continuous tense 'we are planning' is more appropriate.

× Actually, I prefer chatting with old friends, just one friends, 'cause I can show myself really natural, you know, I don't like umm, like social skill, my social skills not so good.

✓ Actually, I prefer chatting with old friends, just one friend, 'cause I can show myself really natural, you know, I don't like umm, like social skills, my social skills are not so good.

The phrase 'one friends' is incorrect because 'one' refers to singular, so 'friend' should be singular. Also, 'social skill' should be plural 'social skills' to match the context, and the verb 'are' is needed for subject-verb agreement.

× So I don't like talk with too much people.

✓ So I don't like to talk with too many people.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the infinitive 'to talk'. Also, 'too much people' is incorrect because 'people' is countable, so 'too many people' is correct.

× It depends if umm the people's my uh good friend.

✓ It depends if umm the people are my uh good friends.

The phrase 'the people's' is incorrect; it should be 'the people are' to form a correct clause. Also, 'people' is plural, so 'friends' should be plural.

× I really like to communicate face to face umm but if like the teacher or the strangers, social media is good choice for me.

✓ I really like to communicate face to face umm but if it's like the teacher or strangers, social media is a good choice for me.

The phrase 'if like the teacher or the strangers' is incomplete and needs 'it's' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'the strangers' should be 'strangers' without 'the' because it refers to people in general. 'A good choice' requires the indefinite article 'a'.

× It also depends on if. Umm, just sometimes I don't like, I don't like that happens 'cause I don't know how to, umm, you know.

✓ It also depends. Umm, sometimes I don't like it when that happens because I don't know how to, umm, you know.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Adding 'it' and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Because' should be used instead of the informal ''cause' for clarity.