Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构较为简单且有重复。建议使用更自然流畅的表达，避免语法错误，并且句子长度控制在5句以内。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially on social media platforms like TikTok and Instagram. These apps help us stay connected and share interesting videos. I find it a fun way to maintain our relationships.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺乏清晰的主题句和连贯的细节。建议直接回答问题，使用清晰的句子结构，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: We usually chat about funny or interesting videos that we share with each other. This helps us laugh and stay entertained during our conversations.

提案: 回答中出现了不恰当的词汇和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议使用准确的词汇表达个人偏好，并且补充原因使回答更完整。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am a quiet person. I find group conversations overwhelming and prefer more intimate, one-on-one talks.

提案: 表达中有语法错误和不自然的用词，句子结构不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并说明原因，使用正确的语法和词汇。

例: I prefer communicating via social media because I am a quiet person and feel nervous during face-to-face conversations. Online chatting helps me feel more comfortable and less pressured.

提案: 回答不完整且语法混乱，缺乏清晰的表达和完整的句子。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子并说明原因。

例: I don't usually argue with my friends because I prefer to keep peace. However, if someone makes me uncomfortable, I might express my feelings calmly.

× This is the one of the way to build our relationships.

✓ This is one of the ways to build our relationships.

这里的定冠词“the”使用错误，应该用不定冠词“one of the ways”，表示“……之一”。同时，“way”应使用复数形式“ways”，因为“one of the”后面通常接复数名词。

× This is the one of the way to build our relationships.

✓ This is one of the ways to build our relationships.

“way”应为复数形式“ways”，因为“one of the”后面应接复数名词。

× I can share with my friends about some videos.

✓ I can share some videos with my friends.

动词“share”后不需要介词“about”，直接加宾语即可。

× Since I had been say umm we usually share about the funny videos or interesting video to each other so we can look each other what we are sending about it.

✓ We usually share funny or interesting videos with each other so we can see what we are sending.

“had been say”时态错误，应改为一般现在时“usually share”，且句子结构混乱，需简化。

× Since I had been say umm we usually share about the funny videos or interesting video to each other so we can look each other what we are sending about it.

✓ We usually share funny or interesting videos with each other so we can see what we are sending.

“interesting video”应为复数“interesting videos”，与前文“funny videos”保持一致。

× Since I had been say umm we usually share about the funny videos or interesting video to each other so we can look each other what we are sending about it.

✓ We usually share funny or interesting videos with each other so we can see what we are sending.

“share about”用法错误，应直接用“share”加宾语；“look each other”应改为“see each other”或“see what we are sending”。

× So we mostly chat about.

✓ So we mostly chat about that.

句子不完整，缺少宾语，需补充“that”使句子完整。

× Only one Prince because I'm I'm a quite quiet person.

✓ Only one person because I'm quite a quiet person.

“Prince”用词错误，应为“person”；“I'm I'm”重复，应删除一个。

× Only one Prince because I'm I'm a quite quiet person.

✓ Only one person because I'm quite a quiet person.

“a quite quiet person”中“quite”是副词，修饰形容词“quiet”，位置正确，但“a quite quiet person”更自然。

× I don't like the vibe of the group of people staying with me.

✓ I don't like the vibe of a group of people staying with me.

“the group of people”应改为不定冠词“a group of people”，表示泛指。

× I think this is really, umm, embraced and.

✓ I think this is really uncomfortable.

“embraced”用词错误，且句子不完整，应改为表达“不舒服”的词汇。

× Since I am just a quiet person so I don't really like to have the communication of face to face, it make me feel nervous.

✓ Since I am a quiet person, I don't really like face-to-face communication; it makes me feel nervous.

“communication of face to face”用法错误，应为“face-to-face communication”；“it make”主谓不一致，应为“it makes”。

× it make me feel nervous.

✓ it makes me feel nervous.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加“s”，即“makes”。

× So I would choose via social media so that make me helpless pressure so I can just comfort.

✓ So I would choose to communicate via social media because it makes me feel less pressure and more comfortable.

“make me helpless pressure”表达错误，应为“makes me feel less pressure”；“comfort”用作动词不当，应改为形容词“comfortable”。

× So I would choose via social media so that make me helpless pressure so I can just comfort.

✓ So I would choose via social media so that it makes me feel less pressure so I can just feel comfortable.

主语“it”缺失，谓语动词“make”应为“makes”，且“comfort”应改为“feel comfortable”。

× Not really uh, because I don't, I don't really like to argue with anyone's not only with my friends, so but if he or she really make me feel like uncomfort by doing the.

✓ Not really, because I don't really like to argue with anyone, not only my friends, but if he or she really makes me feel uncomfortable by doing something.

“anyone's”错误，应为“anyone”；“make”应为“makes”；“uncomfort”应为“uncomfortable”；句子结构混乱，需调整。