Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答はやや冗長で、文法的な誤りもあります。例えば、「communicate in with my smartphone」は不自然です。より簡潔で自然な表現を心がけ、具体的な理由や例を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially through my smartphone because it's convenient. For example, I often share my daily experiences and ideas with them instantly.

提案: 内容が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。「homeworks」ではなく「homework」が正しいです。また、話の流れが不自然なので、具体的な話題と理由を明確に述べることが必要です。

例: We usually talk about our homework because our school gives us many assignments. We help each other by discussing what tasks we need to complete.

提案: 理由は述べられていますが、文法の誤りや繰り返しが目立ちます。より自然な表現で、理由を簡潔に述べることが望ましいです。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it's easier to have a meaningful conversation. Also, I feel shy in big groups, so I find it hard to speak up.

提案: 「commune」は不適切な単語選択で、繰り返しや言い淀みが多いです。より適切な語彙を使い、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see the other person's facial expressions and emotions, which helps me understand them better.

提案: 文法的な誤りがあり、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。「claim the disagreement directly」は不自然なので、「express disagreement politely」などに言い換えると良いでしょう。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when I disagree with their opinions. However, I think it's important to express disagreements politely to resolve problems.

× I prefer to communicate in with my smartphone because it is so convenient to share my ideas or events to my friends, for example, I always chat.

✓ I prefer communicating with my smartphone because it is so convenient to share my ideas or events with my friends; for example, I always chat.

The verb 'prefer' is commonly followed by the gerund form (-ing) when expressing general preferences. Also, 'communicate in with' is incorrect; it should be 'communicating with'. Additionally, 'share ... to my friends' should be 'share ... with my friends' because 'share' takes 'with' as the preposition.

× I usually chat with my friends about the homeworks because my high school always provide us a lot of to do like task, so we need to check each other what homeworks we have to do and the IT is important.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about the homework because my high school always provides us a lot of tasks to do, so we need to check with each other what homework we have to do, and IT is important.

'Homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks'. 'Provide' should be 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'my high school'. 'A lot of to do like task' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of tasks to do'. Also, 'check each other what homeworks' should be 'check with each other what homework'.

× my high school always provide us a lot of to do like task

✓ my high school always provides us a lot of tasks to do

The subject 'my high school' is singular, so the verb should be 'provides' instead of 'provide' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× so we need to check each other what homeworks we have to do

✓ so we need to check with each other what homework we have to do

'Check' in this context requires the preposition 'with' to indicate mutual checking between people.

× what homeworks we have to do

✓ what homework we have to do

'Homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks'.

× my high school always provide us

✓ my high school always provides us

The subject 'my high school' is singular, so the verb should be 'provides' to agree in number.

× I prefer chatting with just one friend rather than in big groups because I find it is difficult to keep conversation and cooperate to solve some problems.

✓ I prefer chatting with just one friend rather than in big groups because I find it difficult to keep the conversation going and cooperate to solve some problems.

'Keep conversation' is incomplete; it should be 'keep the conversation going'. Also, 'cooperate to solve' is acceptable but could be improved by adding 'in order to' or 'to' for clarity.

× Also, I actually I'm actually shy and difficult feel difficult to speak up.

✓ Also, I am actually shy and find it difficult to speak up.

The sentence has redundant and incorrect pronoun usage ('I actually I'm actually'). It should be simplified to 'I am actually shy'. Also, 'difficult feel difficult' is incorrect; it should be 'find it difficult'.

× I prefer to commune.

✓ I prefer to communicate.

'Commune' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'communicate'.

× I prefer communicating face to face because I can see and check the other persons via expressions and emotions.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face because I can see and read the other person's expressions and emotions.

'Check the other persons via expressions and emotions' is awkward and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'read the other person's expressions and emotions'. Also, 'persons' should be singular possessive 'person's'.

× The face to face conversation allows me to umm help communicate better to check.

✓ The face-to-face conversation allows me to communicate better and understand more clearly.

The phrase 'help communicate better to check' is unclear and incorrect. It should be rephrased to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I feel sometimes against to the person's opinions

✓ I sometimes feel against the person's opinions

'Feel against to' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'feel against' or better 'disagree with'.

× I think it is important to claim the disagreement directly.

✓ I think it is important to express disagreement directly.

'Claim the disagreement' is incorrect usage. The correct verb is 'express' when talking about disagreement.