Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且有重复内容。建议简化句子，注意时态和词汇的正确使用，避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me learn new things that I can't learn at school. It also broadens my perspective and makes conversations interesting.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，缺少具体细节。建议完整回答问题，提供具体话题，并使用连词使句子连贯。

例: Recently, I often talk with my friends about the requirements for applying to master's degree programs because I am preparing my applications. Besides that, we also discuss our daily lives and hobbies.

提案: 表达不流畅且含糊，句子结构混乱。建议使用清晰的句子表达观点，并用连词连接理由。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in group conversations, it's hard to concentrate and sometimes people talk over each other, which can be confusing.

提案: 回答未完成且表达不完整。建议完整表达观点，使用正确的语法和词汇，并补充原因。

例: It depends. I prefer face-to-face communication with people I know well because it's more personal. However, with strangers, I prefer social media to keep some distance and feel more comfortable.

提案: 表达不自然且含糊，句子结构不完整。建议用更自然的表达方式说明自己的态度，并解释原因。

例: No, I usually avoid arguing with my friends. I tend to keep my feelings to myself because I don't think small disagreements are worth causing conflict.

× Because I thought chatting with friends can learn a lot of things that I don't know and make my size more broaden and learn a lot of things that I cannot learn at a school.

✓ Because I think chatting with friends can help me learn a lot of things that I don't know, broaden my horizons, and learn many things that I cannot learn at school.

这里时态使用错误，原句中使用了过去时"thought"，但表达的是现在的观点，应使用现在时"think"。此外，"make my size more broaden"表达不正确，应改为"broaden my horizons"，更符合英语表达习惯。

× make my size more broaden

✓ broaden my horizons

"size"用法不当，且"more broaden"结构错误，"broaden"是动词，不能用"more"修饰，应使用"broaden my horizons"表示"开阔视野"。

× So that is why I very liked checking chatting with my friends.

✓ So that is why I really like chatting with my friends.

"liked"是过去时，但句意表达的是现在的喜好，应使用现在时"like"。此外，"checking chatting"表达错误，应为"chatting"。

× Recently I chat about my requirements for grad for master degrees a lot and a lot because this is a time when I need to apply for my master degrees, so and but besides that I always talk about.

✓ Recently, I have been chatting a lot about my requirements for graduate master degrees because this is the time when I need to apply for my master degrees. Besides that, I always talk about other things.

原句时态混乱，"chat"应使用现在完成进行时"have been chatting"以表达最近持续的动作。句子结构不完整，需补充完整表达。

× so and but besides that I always talk about.

✓ Besides that, I always talk about other things.

"so and but"连用不合适，且句子不完整，应简化为"Besides that"并补充完整内容。

× my requirements for grad for master degrees

✓ my requirements for graduate master degrees

"grad for master degrees"表达不准确，应为"graduate master degrees"，且"degrees"复数形式正确。

× my master degrees

✓ my master's degree

"master degrees"应为单数所有格形式"master's degree"，表示硕士学位。

× I would prefer to chat with only one friend because I think in a group communications there is somehow somebody's talking and cannot be, cannot be concentrated on and the people would think they were, they must be they they must be.

✓ I would prefer to chat with only one friend because I think in group communication, sometimes someone is talking and others cannot concentrate, and people might think they must be heard.

"group communications"应为不可数名词"group communication"。句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。

× I would like to communicate with her face to face.

✓ I would like to communicate with her face-to-face.

"face to face"作为副词短语应连写为"face-to-face"。

× But if it's a person that's a stranger for me, I would like to communicate via social media because I want to prevent the.

✓ But if it's a person who is a stranger to me, I would like to communicate via social media because I want to avoid that.

"that's a stranger for me"应改为"who is a stranger to me"，"prevent the"不完整，需补充完整表达。

× No, I'm not. I'm not a person who will argue with my friends.

✓ No, I'm not. I'm not a person who argues with my friends.

"will argue"不符合习惯表达，描述习惯性行为应使用一般现在时"argues"。

× I always swallow down my upsets and the feeling because I don't think that is a big deal and I would like to serve.

✓ I always swallow down my upsets and feelings because I don't think they are a big deal, and I would like to forgive.

"swallow down"应为"swallow"或"swallow down"，"the feeling"应为复数"feelings"，"serve"用词错误，应为"forgive"或"let it go"。