Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrases such as 'laser time'. Use clear and natural expressions to describe your leisure activities. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends during my free time. I also like going outdoors with them to relax and have fun.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and be specific about the topics you discuss. Avoid vague phrases like 'others' and incomplete sentences.

例: It depends on the situation. When I have problems, I talk to my friends for advice. When I'm happy, we share good news and make plans together.

提案: Try to use correct grammar and clearer sentence structures. Explain your preferences with specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer both. For personal matters, I like talking to one close friend. But for fun activities like gossiping or watching movies, I enjoy chatting with a group.

提案: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'boot'. Use correct vocabulary and grammar. Also, explain your preference clearly and logically with linking words.

例: I prefer both, depending on the situation. If the person is far away, I use social media to communicate. But if they are nearby, I prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more personal.

提案: Try to speak clearly and avoid repetition. Use past tense correctly when talking about childhood memories. Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends. I remember when we were children playing football or cricket, we often argued about whether a goal was valid or not.

× I like chatting with my friends in my alone time, uh, laser time.

✓ I like chatting with my friends in my alone time, uh, leisure time.

The word 'laser' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'leisure' which means free time. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it improves clarity.

× And I love to go outdoor with friends in my leisure time.

✓ And I love to go outdoors with friends in my leisure time.

The word 'outdoor' is an adjective; the correct adverb form 'outdoors' should be used to indicate going outside. This is a common prepositional/adverbial error.

× I like to talk with them.

✓ I like to talk to them.

The verb 'talk' is usually followed by the preposition 'to' when indicating the person spoken to. Using 'with' is less common and can be incorrect in this context.

× when I'm happy, I like to talk about them happy things and others.

✓ when I'm happy, I like to talk about the happy things and others.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used here; the definite article 'the' should be used before 'happy things' to specify the things being talked about.

× And if we had any plans and we talk about that plans during.

✓ And if we have any plans, we talk about those plans during.

The verb tense should be present ('have') to match 'talk' and 'plans' should be plural with the demonstrative pronoun 'those' to agree in number.

× I prefer both because I think both are difference in their positions.

✓ I prefer both because I think both are different in their positions.

The adjective 'difference' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective is 'different' to describe 'both'. This is an adjective usage error.

× Like when I wanted to talk about personal that time I like to talk in one friends

✓ Like when I want to talk about personal things, at that time I like to talk to one friend.

The verb tense should be present ('want') to match the habitual action. 'Personal' needs a noun ('things'). 'In one friends' is incorrect; it should be 'to one friend' for correct preposition and singular form.

× when I like to talk like ex extroverted things, gossiping and others chilling see movies that time I would like to talk.

✓ when I like to talk about extroverted things, gossiping, and other chilling activities like watching movies, at that time I would like to talk.

The phrase 'talk like ex extroverted things' is incorrect; it should be 'talk about extroverted things'. Also, 'others chilling see movies' is unclear and corrected to 'other chilling activities like watching movies' for clarity and correct preposition use.

× I prefer boot, but it depends on time.

✓ I prefer both, but it depends on the time.

The word 'boot' is a typo; it should be 'both'. Also, 'depends on time' needs the definite article 'the' before 'time'.

× When the the person I'm talking with far from me, I like to talk in social media.

✓ When the person I'm talking with is far from me, I like to talk on social media.

The verb 'is' is missing after 'person'. The preposition 'in' is incorrect; 'on social media' is the correct phrase.

× But if the person is around me, I like to talk face to face because you know, face to face talk is like something else.

✓ But if the person is around me, I like to talk face to face because, you know, face-to-face talk is like something else.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective ('face-to-face talk'). Commas added for clarity.

× Yes, sometimes I argue with friends, but I remember one thing when we are young and playing football or cricket, we are used to be argue like they talk about the no, no, there's no goal.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with friends, but I remember one thing: when we were young and playing football or cricket, we used to argue about things like 'No, no, there's no goal.'

The tense should be past ('were young', 'used to argue'). 'Used to be argue' is incorrect; it should be 'used to argue'. The phrase 'talk about the no' is unclear and corrected to 'argue about things like...'. Also, punctuation added for clarity.

× We we shared. Yes, yes, this goal, this type of things we argue in childhood.

✓ We shared. Yes, yes, this goal, this type of thing we argued about in childhood.

Repeated 'We' removed. 'Type of things' should be 'type of thing' (singular). 'Argue' should be past tense 'argued' to match 'in childhood'. Added 'about' after 'argued' for correct verb-preposition usage.