Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答に繰り返しや文法の誤りが多く、自然な英語表現が不足しています。より簡潔で正確な文を心がけ、冗長な表現を避けましょう。

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. For example, I often talk about recent events with them. I usually chat every day.

提案: 内容が不明瞭で、繰り返しが多いです。具体的な話題を明確にし、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

例: I usually talk about our daily lives and current events because I want to share these things with my friends. For example, I often chat with them before going to bed.

提案: 繰り返しが多く、文法的な誤りもあります。理由を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にすることを意識しましょう。

例: I prefer to chat with one person because in groups, sometimes people don't reply, which makes me feel sad.

提案: 繰り返しや未完成の文があり、表現が不自然です。理由をはっきり述べ、例を具体的に示す練習をしましょう。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because we can see each other's facial expressions and emotions, which makes the conversation more meaningful.

提案: 文が途中で終わっており、繰り返しも多いです。理由を明確に述べ、文を完結させる練習をしましょう。

例: No, I don't argue with my friends because I want to maintain a peaceful and good relationship with them.

× Yes, I like chatting with friend.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to more than one person in general when talking about chatting with friends.

× I often chat with with my friend and talking about talking about the incident.

✓ I often chat with my friend and talk about the incident.

The phrase 'talking about' should be corrected to 'talk' to maintain parallel verb forms and 'friend' is singular here which is correct if referring to one friend.

× And I, I every day. I chat every day.

✓ I chat every day.

The sentence 'And I, I every day.' is incomplete and redundant. It should be simplified to 'I chat every day.' for clarity and correctness.

× I usually talk talk about our our daily life and present events because I I want to share share these things with my friend.

✓ I usually talk about our daily life and present events because I want to share these things with my friends.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the plural possessive 'our' and the context of sharing with multiple friends.

× For example, I I I often chat child date before going to bed.

✓ For example, I often chat with my child before going to bed.

The phrase 'chat child date' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'chat with my child' to make sense and be grammatically correct.

× No, I prefer to chat with one one person because sometimes when when I chat with groups some someone don't don't reply me and I feel sad so I I like to chat with one.

✓ No, I prefer to chat with one person because sometimes when I chat with groups, some people don't reply to me and I feel sad, so I like to chat with one.

The word 'groups' is plural and 'some someone' is incorrect; it should be 'some people'. Also, 'reply me' should be 'reply to me'. The sentence is corrected for plural forms and preposition usage.

× No, I prefer to chat with one one person because sometimes when when I chat with groups some someone don't don't reply me and I feel sad so I I like to chat with one.

✓ No, I prefer to chat with one person because sometimes when I chat with groups, some people don't reply to me and I feel sad, so I like to chat with one.

The verb 'reply' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating the person being replied to. Therefore, 'reply me' should be 'reply to me'.

× I prefer to to communicate with people face to face because when when we talk face to face, we can see our face and can feel feel the emotion.

✓ I prefer to communicate with people face to face because when we talk face to face, we can see their faces and can feel the emotion.

The phrase 'see our face' is incorrect because when talking about others, 'their faces' is appropriate. Also, 'feel the emotion' is acceptable but 'feel emotions' could be better; however, the main issue is pronoun use.

× I prefer to to communicate with people face to face because when when we talk face to face, we can see our face and can feel feel the emotion.

✓ I prefer to communicate with people face to face because when we talk face to face, we can see their faces and can feel the emotion.

Using 'our face' is incorrect when referring to others' faces; 'their faces' is the correct pronoun to indicate the faces of the people you are communicating with.

× No, I, I don't argue with friends because I don't want to argue with with them.

✓ No, I don't argue with friends because I don't want to argue with them.

The sentence is mostly correct; the only issue is the repeated word 'with'. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× I want to be peaceful with my friend and keep good relationship with them.

✓ I want to be peaceful with my friends and keep a good relationship with them.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'them'. Also, 'good relationship' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct.