Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但表达有些重复，如“happy and enjoyable”意义相近，建议避免冗余。可以更简洁地表达观点，并用更具体的细节丰富内容。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it brightens my mood. For instance, we often share stories about our daily experiences, which helps me feel connected and supported.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“disgusting discussing”不合适，且表达不流畅。建议注意语法准确性，避免口语填充词，使用恰当词汇。

例: We usually talk about interesting events in our daily lives and recently, we've enjoyed discussing new movies we've watched.

提案: 回答结构清晰，但有语法错误，如“just phone close friends”表达不准确。建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配，使表达更自然。

例: I prefer chatting with a group because it's more lively. However, when I'm stressed, I like to talk to a close friend one-on-one to feel more relaxed and supported.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，如“directed, direct and convene”不准确，句子不完整。建议加强语法练习，使用正确词汇表达观点。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's more direct and convenient. However, recently I haven't had many opportunities to meet friends in person, so we usually chat via social media.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构不够流畅，如“and this we have so many things in common”不自然。建议使用更连贯的句子连接词。

例: I rarely argue with my friends because we share similar opinions on most topics, which is probably because we have many interests in common.

× Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it makes me feel happy and enjoyable, and for example, we often share interesting stories about our daily lives and the conversation makes me feel supported.

✓ Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it makes me feel happy and joyful. For example, we often share interesting stories about our daily lives, and the conversation makes me feel supported.

“enjoyable”是形容词，不能用来修饰“feel”，应使用副词或形容词“joyful”来表达感受。句子中“and for example”连接不当，应拆分为两个句子。

× We usually chat about interesting things uh, in our daily lives and it we also enjoy disgusting discussing recently movies.

✓ We usually chat about interesting things in our daily lives, and we also enjoy discussing recent movies.

句中“uh”应去除，且“it we”是多余且错误的词语，应删除。形容词“disgusting”用错，应为“discussing”。“recently movies”应改为“recent movies”，形容词修饰名词顺序错误。

× I prefer chatting with a group of people because it's more fun and lively. However, if I feel stressful and upset, I like to talk with just phone close friends to feel more relaxed and supported.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because it's more fun and lively. However, if I feel stressed and upset, I like to talk with just a few close friends to feel more relaxed and supported.

“feel stressful”应为“feel stressed”，因为“stressful”形容事物，“stressed”形容人。短语“phone close friends”错误，应为“a few close friends”表示数量。

× I prefer to communicate face to face, it's more directed, direct and convene. But but recently I don't have chances to chat with face to face because my friends not near me and will usually by social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face; it's more direct and convenient. But recently, I don't have chances to chat face to face because my friends are not near me and usually use social media.

“directed”应为“direct”，“convene”用错，应为“convenient”。“chat with face to face”结构错误，应为“chat face to face”。“my friends not near me”缺少动词，应为“my friends are not near me”。“will usually by social media”语法错误，应为“usually use social media”。

× I rarely argue with my friends. My friends and I always have the same opinion on the issue and this we have so many things in common.

✓ I rarely argue with my friends. My friends and I always have the same opinion on issues, and we have so many things in common.

“and this we have so many things in common”结构混乱，应改为“and we have so many things in common”。“on the issue”改为复数“on issues”更符合语境。