Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول تحسين وضوح إجابتك وتنظيمها بشكل أفضل. استخدم جمل كاملة وواضحة وتجنب التردد والكلمات غير الضرورية. ركز على تقديم إجابة مباشرة مع تفاصيل داعمة واضحة.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend Shema. We usually talk two or three times a week about our daily lives and experiences.

提案: حاول أن تكون أكثر تحديدًا في إجابتك واستخدم كلمات واضحة لوصف المواضيع التي تتحدث عنها. تجنب التردد واستخدم روابط بين الأفكار لجعل الإجابة أكثر ترابطًا.

例: Usually, I chat with my friends about events that happened during my day and discuss ways to improve myself. Sometimes, I also share my feelings and thoughts with them.

提案: حاول استخدام جمل أكثر تنظيمًا وربط الأفكار باستخدام كلمات ربط. قدم أسبابًا واضحة لتفضيلك وادعمها بتفاصيل محددة.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I find group chats overwhelming due to many messages. One-on-one conversations help me feel more relaxed and focused.

提案: حاول تحسين قواعد اللغة واستخدام تراكيب صحيحة. قدم إجابة واضحة مع شرح الأسباب واستخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح الأفكار.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal. However, since some of my friends live far away, I use social media to stay connected with them.

提案: حاول التعبير عن أفكارك بشكل أوضح واستخدم جمل كاملة. قدم تفاصيل محددة عن المواقف وكيف تشعر، مع استخدام كلمات ربط لجعل الإجابة منطقية.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when I make a mistake. For example, if I do something wrong, my friend might say it's a big mistake, which makes me feel angry, but I know she cares about me.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friend most of the time I chat with my best friend.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends. Most of the time, I chat with my best friend.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' when talking generally about chatting with friends. Also, the sentence needs to be split for clarity.

× She names uh, Shema uh, and uh, maybe two or three times and there I am chatting with him.

✓ Her name is Shema, and maybe two or three times I chat with him.

The pronoun 'She' should be 'Her' when referring to the name. Also, the sentence structure is unclear and needs correction for clarity.

× I'm talking about what, what do my.

✓ I'm talking about what I do.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It should be corrected to a complete sentence to convey the intended meaning.

× Sometime, uh, I am chatting with my friend about uh uh, something happen on my day and how to soft or improve uh, this uh, also uh, something uh, when I I feel.

✓ Sometimes, I chat with my friends about something that happened during my day and how to solve or improve it. Also, about how I feel.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' for frequency. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' for general chatting. 'Happen' needs 'that happened' for past event. 'Soft' is incorrect; should be 'solve'. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring.

× I don't like chatting with the group because I I don't like a lot of message but I I am.

✓ I don't like chatting with groups because I don't like a lot of messages, but I am.

'The group' should be 'groups' for general meaning. 'Message' should be plural 'messages' to match 'a lot of'. The sentence is incomplete and needs completion.

× My favorite chatting is only one friend because I feel so much relax.

✓ My favorite chatting is with only one friend because I feel very relaxed.

'Relax' is an adjective here and should be 'relaxed'. Also, 'only one friend' needs 'with' to be grammatically correct.

× I am preferred to communication face to face but sometime my friend live far away from my house that's showed me connect with the technology or social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face, but sometimes my friends live far away from my house, so I connect using technology or social media.

'I am preferred' is incorrect; should be 'I prefer'. 'Communication' should be 'communicate' (verb). 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'That's showed me' is incorrect; should be 'so I connect'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× Do you argue with friends?

✓ Do you argue with friends?

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× Actually, yes, sometime when I do something is wrong and ask my friend, I am do that, she said That is a big mistake why you don't like that And I I am feel angry, but he know my heart is.

✓ Actually, yes, sometimes when I do something wrong and ask my friend, I am doing that, she says that it is a big mistake and asks why I don't like that. I feel angry, but she knows my heart.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Do something is wrong' should be 'do something wrong'. 'I am do that' should be 'I am doing that'. 'She said' should be 'she says' for present tense. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.