Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误，如“check thing”应为“check things”，且表达重复，建议简化并使用更地道的表达。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about how I'm feeling and share details about our daily lives, like what happened yesterday.

提案: 回答内容较具体，但语法和表达不够准确，如“what did I eat for today's morning”应为“What I ate this morning”。建议注意时态和表达的自然性。

例: I usually talk about my relationship with my partner and share details about my daily life, such as what I ate this morning or events from yesterday.

提案: 表达不够流畅，存在语法错误，如“face to one person”应为“talk to one person”，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子并使用正确表达。

例: I prefer talking to one person because I feel more relaxed and less nervous than when speaking in a group.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“because for me face to face is very important because”。建议避免重复，使用更简洁的表达。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see people's reactions immediately, which is not possible online.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“the our mood”，且内容表达重复。建议注意冠词使用和句子简洁。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, usually about how difficult our professor is or the challenging homework. Occasionally, we also argue about our moods.

× I like to check thing with my friends and we usually chat with my friends about what my mood is and my daily life, for example, what was going on yesterday, something like that.

✓ I like to check things with my friends and we usually chat about my mood and my daily life, for example, what was going on yesterday, something like that.

这里的“thing”应为复数形式“things”，因为表示多个事情。

× I may prefer to chat with 1P1 person because when I face to one person, what I'm talking about, I don't have to be nervous because that is a little bit free for me.

✓ I may prefer to chat with one person because when I face one person, what I'm talking about, I don't have to be nervous because that is a little bit free for me.

动词face后不需要介词to，正确用法是face someone。

× And if I have to face to a lot of people, group of people, I will be very nervous.

✓ And if I have to face a lot of people, a group of people, I will be very nervous.

同上，face后不加to。

× I too prefer to chat with people face to face because for me face to face is very important because I can see what the reaction that someone gives me, but if in online I can't see it instantly.

✓ I also prefer to chat with people face to face because for me face to face is very important since I can see the reaction someone gives me, but if I am online I can't see it instantly.

“too”用法不当，改为“also”；“if in online”应改为“if I am online”；“what the reaction that someone gives me”结构不正确，改为“the reaction someone gives me”。

× But sometimes we will argue about the our mood.

✓ But sometimes we will argue about our mood.

“the our mood”中“the”和“our”不能同时使用，应去掉“the”。