Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda gereksiz tekrarlar var ve cümleler biraz karışık. Daha doğal ve etkili olmak için, cevabınızı doğrudan verip, ardından kısa ve net destekleyici detaylar ekleyin. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends very much. I often use social media platforms like Instagram to stay in touch. For example, I text and make video calls regularly, which helps me feel connected.

提案: Cevabınızda konuyu net ifade etmekte zorlanıyorsunuz ve tekrarlar mevcut. Daha spesifik ve düzenli cevaplar vermek için, doğrudan konuya girip, nedenlerini ve örnekleri bağlaçlarla destekleyin.

例: I usually chat about various topics, but mostly about school gossip. Since we are teenagers, sharing news about classmates is common. For instance, we often discuss recent events happening at school.

提案: Cevabınızda anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha net ve akıcı cevaplar vermek için, doğrudan tercihlerinizi belirtip, nedenlerini açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla açıklayın.

例: I prefer chatting with a group because it is more lively and fun. Although I have chatted one-on-one before, I find group conversations more engaging and less boring.

提案: Cevabınızda fikirlerinizi iyi ifade etmişsiniz ancak cümle yapıları biraz tekrarlı ve uzun. Daha doğal ve etkili olmak için, cümlelerinizi kısaltıp bağlaçlarla akıcı hale getirin.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more enjoyable and allows better self-expression. Talking in person helps me understand emotions and reactions more clearly than social media.

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam karışıklığı var. Daha etkili cevaplar için, cümlelerinizi doğru yapıda kurup, nedenleri ve sonuçları açıkça belirtin.

例: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes. Since my friends influence me a lot, disagreements happen occasionally. For example, when they annoy me, we might have a small fight, but we usually resolve it quickly.

× I'm love chatting with my friends all the time.

✓ I love chatting with my friends all the time.

The verb 'love' should be in the base form after 'I' and not in the present participle form 'I'm love'. The auxiliary 'am' is not needed here.

× I chat on my friends about everything

✓ I chat with my friends about everything

The correct preposition to use with 'chat' when referring to people is 'with', not 'on'.

× we have a lot of gossips about everyone

✓ we have a lot of gossip about everyone

'Gossip' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'gossips' in this context.

× I'm sharing with my friends about the gossip

✓ I'm sharing the gossip with my friends

The verb 'share' is followed directly by the object, and the preposition 'with' indicates the person with whom something is shared. 'About' is unnecessary here.

× I prefer chat with a group

✓ I prefer to chat with a group

After the verb 'prefer', the infinitive form 'to chat' should be used instead of the bare verb 'chat'.

× experience just only one friend

✓ experience only one friend

The phrase 'just only' is redundant; 'only' alone is sufficient.

× when I'm chatting, what with only one friend, I, I think it's boring

✓ when I'm chatting with only one friend, I think it's boring

The phrase 'what with' is incorrect here and should be removed for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× face to face communication is more enjoyable than communicate with social media

✓ face-to-face communication is more enjoyable than communicating via social media

The comparison requires parallel structure: 'communication' vs. 'communicating'. Also, 'via' is a better preposition than 'with' for social media.

× because you talking face to face with your friend

✓ because you are talking face to face with your friend

The present continuous tense requires the auxiliary verb 'are' before the '-ing' form 'talking'.

× most of my friends are influenced me actually

✓ most of my friends influence me actually

The verb 'influence' should be in the base form to agree with the plural subject 'friends' and to correctly express the meaning.

× I always have a argument with my friends

✓ I always have an argument with my friends

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'argument'.

× Sometimes my friends annoys me about something

✓ Sometimes my friends annoy me about something

The verb 'annoy' should be in the base form 'annoy' to agree with the plural subject 'friends'.