Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more natural and concise. Avoid double negatives like 'without saying nothing'. Also, directly answer the question first, then add a supporting detail if needed.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my colleagues and friends. However, sometimes I prefer to just sit quietly with them without talking.

提案: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and lacks coherence. Use linking words properly and avoid vague phrases like 'kind of making fun'. Be specific and clear in your description.

例: We usually talk about our careers and future plans. Additionally, we often joke with each other and share personal stories to strengthen our friendship.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repeating words and use correct grammar.

例: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I prefer chatting one-on-one with my close friend, but other times I enjoy talking in a group and sharing my thoughts with many people.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has some grammar mistakes and informal expressions. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague terms like 'fake friends'. Be more formal and clear.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it shows genuine connection and allows us to interact naturally. In contrast, social media can sometimes feel less authentic.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and provide a clear example. Avoid incomplete sentences and improve sentence structure.

例: Yes, sometimes we argue about small things, like when we disagree on career choices. For example, I suggested a career path to my friend, but he didn't like it, so we had a disagreement.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my colleagues and friends, but I often sit with him without saying nothing.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my colleagues and friends, but I often sit with them without saying anything.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrect because it refers to a singular male, but 'colleagues and friends' is plural, so 'them' should be used. Also, 'without saying nothing' is a double negative; it should be 'without saying anything' to be grammatically correct.

× We often chat about our career and our future, however, we kind of making fun of each other and obviously we often share our personal things too.

✓ We often chat about our career and our future; however, we kind of make fun of each other and obviously we often share our personal things too.

The word 'however' is used incorrectly here; it should be preceded by a semicolon or period to separate two independent clauses. Also, 'we kind of making' is incorrect; it should be 'we kind of make' to maintain correct verb form.

× Actually it it's very time to time.

✓ Actually, it happens very time to time.

The phrase 'it it's' is incorrect and unclear. Adding a verb like 'happens' clarifies the meaning. Also, a comma after 'Actually' improves sentence flow.

× Sometimes I enjoy the company of my personal friend who is my homie, but sometimes I do love to chat with with a group bunch of group of peoples and share my own thoughts.

✓ Sometimes I enjoy the company of my personal friend who is my homie, but sometimes I do love to chat with a bunch of people and share my own thoughts.

The phrase 'a group bunch of group of peoples' is redundant and incorrect. 'A bunch of people' is the correct plural form. Also, 'peoples' is incorrect here; 'people' is the plural of 'person'.

× Actually I'm kind of person who prefer face to face meetings because that shows our connection and and how we talk in real life rather than use of social media with fake friends.

✓ Actually, I'm the kind of person who prefers face-to-face meetings because that shows our connection and how we talk in real life rather than using social media with fake friends.

The phrase 'kind of person who prefer' needs 'the' before 'kind' and 'prefers' to agree with singular subject. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face'. 'Rather than use of social media' should be 'rather than using social media' for correct verb form.

× Sometime we did argue with any kind of silly things which we don't agree, such as we don't like our career path as I suggested him and he don't like.

✓ Sometimes we did argue about silly things which we didn't agree on, such as not liking our career path as I suggested to him and he didn't like it.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. 'Argue with any kind of silly things' should be 'argue about silly things'. 'We don't agree' should be past tense 'we didn't agree'. 'Suggested him' is incorrect; it should be 'suggested to him'. 'He don't like' should be 'he didn't like' to match past tense.