Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, explain why you like chatting with friends in a simple and direct way.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we share similar interests and understand each other's problems due to our age group.

提案: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Please try to answer directly and clearly, using correct grammar and complete sentences. Also, provide specific examples of topics you chat about with different friends.

例: It depends on the friend. For example, with close friends who have similar tastes, we talk about new clothes and fashion. But with other friends, we might discuss their interests or hobbies.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and correct grammar for better clarity.

例: It depends on the situation. If I want to discuss something personal, I prefer talking to one close friend because I trust them. However, for social events like parties, I enjoy chatting with a group of friends.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by grammar errors and unclear expressions. Try to organize your answer with clear sentences and use linking words to improve coherence.

例: It depends on how comfortable I am with the person. If I know them well, I prefer face-to-face communication. But if I don't know them well and need to discuss something serious, I prefer to talk online.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentences and linking words to express your ideas more naturally and effectively.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends because we have different opinions. When I share my point of view, they may not agree, which can lead to arguments occasionally.

× In our IS group it is common to chat with our friends because we have same mindset and we are going from same problems because of our age group.

✓ In our IS group it is common to chat with our friends because we have the same mindset and we are going through the same problems because of our age group.

The phrase 'have same mindset' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'same mindset'. Also, 'going from same problems' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'going through the same problems'. These are singular/plural and preposition usage issues. Adding 'the' specifies the mindset and problems shared, and 'going through' is the correct phrasal verb to express experiencing problems.

× It based on what kind of friend we are talking.

✓ It is based on what kind of friend we are talking to.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to form the present tense 'It is based'. Also, 'talking' requires the preposition 'to' when referring to the person we are speaking with. This corrects the verb form and preposition usage.

× Like if I'm talking to a friend who have same face and since as me we talk about new clothes and what kind of clothes we are going to wear.

✓ Like if I'm talking to a friend who has the same face and size as me, we talk about new clothes and what kind of clothes we are going to wear.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'a friend' (third person singular issue). Also, 'since' should be 'size'. The phrase 'same face and size' needs the definite article 'the' before 'same face' and 'size' to specify. This corrects subject-verb agreement and word choice.

× But if I'm walking talking to a person who is interested.

✓ But if I'm talking to a person who is interested.

The phrase 'walking talking' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'talking' alone to maintain sentence clarity and correct structure.

× To be honest it is basis on the situation like if I have to talk about something personal I will talk with one of my closest friends rather than in a group because I trust that friend.

✓ To be honest, it is based on the situation. Like if I have to talk about something personal, I will talk with one of my closest friends rather than in a group because I trust that friend.

'It is basis on' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'it is based on'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs punctuation to separate ideas for clarity.

× So if I have to talk like in for a party I talk with a group of friends because we are have to go.

✓ So if I have to talk, like for a party, I talk with a group of friends because we have to go.

The phrase 'we are have to go' is incorrect; it should be 'we have to go'. Also, 'like in for a party' is awkward and corrected to 'like for a party'. This fixes verb usage and sentence clarity.

× If I am very comfortable with the person who I am talking, I prefer to communicate with them in person rather than in online.

✓ If I am very comfortable with the person who I am talking to, I prefer to communicate with them in person rather than online.

The verb 'talking' requires the preposition 'to' when referring to the person. Also, 'in online' is incorrect; the correct phrase is simply 'online' without 'in'.

× But if I am I haven't made that person and I have to talk something serious, I will like to talk with them in online.

✓ But if I haven't met that person and I have to talk about something serious, I would like to talk with them online.

The phrase 'I am I haven't made that person' is incorrect; it should be 'I haven't met that person'. Also, 'talk something serious' needs the preposition 'about'. 'I will like' should be 'I would like' to express preference politely. 'In online' should be 'online'.

× Obviously people have different kind of mindset and even we are very close with our friends, sometimes their point of view doesn't feel right to us.

✓ Obviously, people have different kinds of mindsets and even if we are very close with our friends, sometimes their points of view don't feel right to us.

'Different kind of mindset' should be pluralized to 'different kinds of mindsets' to agree with 'people'. Also, 'point of view' should be plural 'points of view' to match 'their'. Subject-verb agreement corrected from 'doesn't' to 'don't'.

× So we give our point of view to them and they don't feel good about if it's and we can argue sometime.

✓ So we give our point of view to them, and if they don't feel good about it, we can argue sometimes.

The original sentence is confusing and incorrectly structured. 'If it's' is unclear and should be 'if they don't feel good about it'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct conjunction use.