Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“chatting is a relaxing and pleasure thing”应改为“chatting is relaxing and enjoyable”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and have fun. We often talk about topics like food and sports.

提案: 回答内容不够清晰，存在语法和逻辑错误，导致表达不连贯。建议直接回答问题，使用清晰的句子结构，并提供具体细节。

例: We usually talk about what to eat for lunch and our plans for the evening. For example, we might decide to go to a restaurant or watch a movie together.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it feels more respectful and allows for serious conversations.

提案: 表达基本清楚，但语法和用词不够准确，如“respectful person to talk with somebody”应改为“more respectful to talk face-to-face”。建议注意语法准确性和用词恰当。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is more respectful and makes it easier to express myself clearly.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“it didn't hurt our shape”应为“it doesn't harm our friendship”。建议使用简单句子表达观点，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because I have traditional ideas. However, these arguments do not harm our friendship.

× I always chatting with my friends such as food and sports.

✓ I am always chatting with my friends about topics such as food and sports.

动词后面缺少助动词，正确结构是“am chatting”，表示现在进行时。

× I usually check what we need to eat at lunch and what we should do in the evening.

✓ I usually chat about what we need to eat at lunch and what we should do in the evening.

这里应使用“chat”而非“check”，因为谈话内容是聊天的主题。

× That's I always chat with my friend and my friend often tell me she also didn't.

✓ I always chat with my friends, and my friends often tell me things too.

“friend”应为复数形式“friends”，因为通常指多个朋友。

× That's I always chat with my friend and my friend often tell me she also didn't.

✓ I always chat with my friends, and they often tell me things too.

代词使用不当，应使用复数代词“they”指代“friends”。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think it is respectful person to chat with one friend because uh, in addition, uh, I think I should chat him with my friend seriously.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think it is more respectful to chat seriously with one person.

代词使用错误，“chat him with my friend”结构不正确，应简化表达。

× I prefer chatting with my friend face to face because I think it is respectful person to talk with somebody and it is easy to tell clearly something.

✓ I prefer chatting with my friend face to face because I think it is more respectful to talk with somebody, and it is easier to express things clearly.

“tell clearly something”表达不自然，应改为“express things clearly”。

× Actually it's yes, because I am a person who has an old idea. So, uh, in something I often argue with my friends, but it didn't hurt our shape.

✓ Actually, yes, because I am a person who has old ideas. So, sometimes I often argue with my friends, but it doesn't hurt our relationship.

时态错误，“didn't hurt”应为现在时“doesn't hurt”，且“shape”用词不当，应为“relationship”。