Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢和朋友聊天的原因，但句子结构较长且有些重复。建议简化句子，避免冗余，并注意语法，如“in this different cities”应为“in different cities”。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially on the phone because we live in different cities. It helps me express my feelings and share fun stories with them. Also, they often support me when I need help.

提案: 你的回答内容具体且有例子，表达清晰。建议在连接词使用上更自然，如用“for instance”替代“for example”，并注意句子流畅性。

例: I usually chat with my friends about daily events, like the lessons I attended or the food I tried. For instance, we share our school experiences and interesting things that happen during the day. These small talks help strengthen our friendship.

提案: 回答结构清晰，内容具体。建议在表达时使用更多连接词，如“because”后可加“so”，使句子更连贯。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I'm introverted, so I feel more comfortable opening up in private conversations. For example, I can share my honest thoughts and feelings without worrying about others.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但最后一句“through their facial expressions or others”不够完整。建议补充完整并避免重复“others”。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because, although I often use social media, it's sometimes hard to express my true feelings online. In person, I can understand others better through their facial expressions and body language.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“seldom with my friends”应为“seldom argue with my friends”，且“avoid to argue”应为“avoid arguing”。建议注意动词搭配和句子完整性。

例: Actually, I seldom argue with my friends because we respect each other's opinions. For example, when we have different ideas, we discuss them calmly instead of arguing. I think arguing is not practical, so we try to avoid it.

× Yes, I'm really fond of communicating with my friends especially on phone because we are in this different cities and I think chatting with my friends is a good way to express my emotions and I can share some fun stories with them.

✓ Yes, I'm really fond of communicating with my friends especially on the phone because we are in different cities and I think chatting with my friends is a good way to express my emotions and I can share some fun stories with them.

The phrase 'on phone' is missing the definite article 'the'. In English, when referring to using the phone as a medium, we say 'on the phone'. Also, 'this different cities' is incorrect; 'this' should be removed to correctly say 'different cities'.

× Well, I usually chat with my friends about daily events, such as the lessons I have taken that day or food I have eaten.

✓ Well, I usually chat with my friends about daily events, such as the lessons I have taken that day or the food I have eaten.

When referring to specific food that has been eaten, the definite article 'the' is needed before 'food' to specify it. Without 'the', the sentence sounds incomplete or general.

× Actually, I seldom with my friends because of the respect for each other's opinion and we try to understand different opinions of you.

✓ Actually, I seldom argue with my friends because of the respect for each other's opinions and we try to understand different opinions of others.

The verb 'argue' is missing after 'seldom'. Also, 'opinions' should be plural to match 'each other's'. The phrase 'different opinions of you' is incorrect; it should be 'different opinions of others' to refer to other people, not the listener.

× And I think arguing is not so practical, so we avoid to argue.

✓ And I think arguing is not so practical, so we avoid arguing.

The verb 'avoid' should be followed by the gerund form of the verb, not the infinitive. Therefore, 'avoid to argue' is incorrect; it should be 'avoid arguing'.