Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like chatting with friends?
受験者
Yes, I prefer chatting with my friends, especially my best friend. We can talk about anything like homework, shopping, skin care or makeup. I feel convinced.
試験官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
受験者
I talked about anything with my friends, but I usually talk about homework with my friends. Sometime I also talk about movies which we saw in the cinema. And.
試験官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
受験者
I prefer to chat with a group because I can hit it off with new friends. It make me fun and have many relationship in social.
試験官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
受験者
I enjoy communicating face to face because I can hang out with my friends, we can go to the cinema or go for the coffee and talk about anything instead of just chatting online.
試験官
Do you argue with friends?
受験者
Not really, because my friends and I were friends when we were children and we have many things in common. However, sometimes we have some disagreement and we make up quickly.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
スコア: 65.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh sử dụng các cụm từ không phù hợp như "I feel convinced". Hãy sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc và thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để làm phong phú câu trả lời.
例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend. We often talk about our homework, shopping, and even skincare tips. It helps me feel connected and supported.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
スコア: 50.0提案: Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và tránh câu trả lời bị dang dở. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.
例: I usually talk about homework with my friends. Sometimes, we also discuss movies that we have seen in the cinema, and other times we share our weekend plans.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
スコア: 55.0提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các cụm từ tự nhiên và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể hơn.
例: I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to meet new people and have fun. It also helps me build more social relationships.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
スコア: 70.0提案: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn nên sử dụng dấu câu hợp lý để câu văn rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm một câu kết để làm câu trả lời hoàn chỉnh hơn.
例: I enjoy communicating face to face because I can hang out with my friends. We can go to the cinema or have coffee and talk about anything, which feels more personal than just chatting online.
Do you argue with friends?
スコア: 75.0提案: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì cho phù hợp và thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.
例: Not really, because my friends and I have been close since childhood and share many interests. However, when we do have disagreements, we usually resolve them quickly by talking things through.
文法
× I talked about anything with my friends, but I usually talk about homework with my friends.
✓ I talk about anything with my friends, but I usually talk about homework with my friends.
The sentence mixes past tense 'talked' with present tense 'usually talk'. Since the question asks about usual habits, present tense should be used consistently.
× Sometime I also talk about movies which we saw in the cinema.
✓ Sometimes I also talk about movies which we saw at the cinema.
The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, the correct preposition for location in this context is 'at' rather than 'in' when referring to 'the cinema'.
× And.
The sentence fragment 'And.' is incomplete and does not form a proper sentence. It should be removed or completed to convey a full idea.
× It make me fun and have many relationship in social.
✓ It makes me happy and helps me have many relationships in social settings.
The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'fun' is incorrectly used as an adjective here; 'happy' is more appropriate. 'Have many relationship' should be 'have many relationships' to use the plural form. 'In social' is incomplete; 'in social settings' or 'in social life' is correct.
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