Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý nghĩa, nhưng cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, 'more better' là sai ngữ pháp, nên dùng 'better' hoặc 'much better'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn để tránh lặp từ và dư thừa.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I am home alone because it helps me feel connected and improves my mood.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'the events are the rumors' nên là 'events and rumors', 'I always feel interesting' nên là 'I always find it interesting'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như 'although it's not relevant to us' mà không giải thích rõ.

例: We usually talk about school events and rumors because I find these topics interesting, even if they don't directly involve us.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'are like talking with only one friends' nên là 'I prefer talking with only one friend', 'compared to the root' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it helps me understand them better and I feel more comfortable sharing my ideas.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'it have expressed' nên là 'it expresses'. Câu trả lời có thể được chia thành hai câu rõ ràng hơn để tránh dài dòng và làm rõ ý hơn.

例: I like both ways of communication. I use social media to share the latest news quickly, but I prefer face-to-face talks because they express emotions better.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt, ví dụ 'this type of boosts' nên là 'this helps boost'. Bạn cũng nên tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như 'uh' và làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about math problems in class. These discussions help improve our problem-solving and critical thinking skills.

× Like I will avoid the feelings of being isolated so this could make my mood more better.

✓ Like I will avoid the feelings of being isolated so this could make my mood better.

The phrase 'more better' is incorrect because 'better' is already a comparative adjective and does not need 'more'. Using 'more better' is redundant. The correct form is simply 'better'.

× Well, we usually talk about school drama like the events are the rumors that happens in our school.

✓ Well, we usually talk about school drama like the events or the rumors that happen in our school.

The word 'happens' is singular, but it refers to plural subjects 'events' and 'rumors'. Therefore, the verb should be plural 'happen' to agree with the plural subject.

× This is because, uh, I always feel interesting when share about this idea although it's not relevant to us.

✓ This is because, uh, I always feel interested when I share about this idea although it's not relevant to us.

The adjective 'interesting' describes something that causes interest, while 'interested' describes a feeling. The correct form here is 'interested' because the speaker is describing their own feeling. Also, the subject 'I' is missing before 'share'.

× The latter, I say, are like talking with only one friends because it's helped me gain more comprehensive understanding about this person.

✓ The latter, I say, is like talking with only one friend because it has helped me gain a more comprehensive understanding about this person.

'The latter' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'friends' should be singular 'friend' because it refers to 'only one'. 'It's helped' should be 'it has helped' for clarity. 'More comprehensive understanding' needs an article 'a' before it.

× Moreover, I feel myself more comfortable when sharing the ideas compared to the root.

✓ Moreover, I feel more comfortable when sharing the ideas compared to the group.

The reflexive pronoun 'myself' is unnecessary here; 'I feel more comfortable' is correct. Also, 'root' seems to be a typo or incorrect word; likely intended 'group'.

× I prefer both types of communications like I usually use social media when I have the latest view and I want to share it immediately but I also prefer talking face to face because it have expressed the emotion.

✓ I prefer both types of communication. I usually use social media when I have the latest view and want to share it immediately, but I also prefer talking face to face because it expresses emotion.

'Communications' should be singular 'communication' when referring to types. 'It have expressed' is incorrect; 'it' is singular so the verb should be 'has expressed' or better 'expresses'. Also, sentence structure improved for clarity.

× Yes, I usually argue with my friends, uh, partly.

✓ Yes, I usually argue with my friends, but only partly.

The word 'partly' is an adverb and needs a conjunction like 'but' to connect the ideas properly. This improves sentence clarity and correctness.

× We usually talk about the math problems in the class. Uh, this type of boosts our problem solving skills and the critical thinking, so I find it's really helpful.

✓ We usually talk about the math problems in class. Uh, this type of discussion boosts our problem-solving skills and critical thinking, so I find it's really helpful.

'In the class' is better as 'in class' for natural usage. 'This type of' needs a noun after it, such as 'discussion'. 'Problem solving' should be hyphenated as 'problem-solving'. 'The critical thinking' should be 'critical thinking' without 'the'.