Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is good but try to use present tense consistently and avoid minor grammatical errors. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas.

例: I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us stay connected despite our busy schedules. We often talk about our daily routines, share interesting stories, and support each other.

提案: Avoid repeating words like 'recent' twice and remove unnecessary prepositions such as 'about' after 'discuss'. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary to describe topics.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, including school, work, and hobbies. We often share funny stories or discuss recently released movies and the music we enjoy.

提案: Be careful with word order, for example, say 'a deeper connection' instead of 'more deeper connection'. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your answer is complete and clear.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for a deeper connection and more meaningful conversation. When talking one-on-one, it's easier to focus on each other's feelings and thoughts. For example, I often find that I can share personal experiences more comfortably.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'Umm' and repeated words such as 'clearer clearer'. Also, try to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid sentence fragments like 'For instance.'

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction. When talking in person, you can read body language and facial expressions, which helps avoid misunderstandings. For instance, discussing important matters is often clearer.

提案: Your answer is clear and well-structured. To improve, try to add a linking word to connect your ideas more smoothly.

例: Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different perspectives on important topics. However, these arguments are usually friendly and help us understand each other better. For example, we might debate about movies or current events, which leads to interesting discussions.

× I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for more deeper connection and meaningful conversation.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for a deeper connection and meaningful conversation.

The phrase 'more deeper' is incorrect because 'deeper' is already a comparative adjective. Using 'more' with a comparative adjective is redundant. The correct form is 'a deeper connection'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× For example, I often find that I can share personal experiences more comfortably and.

✓ For example, I often find that I can share personal experiences more comfortably.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. Removing the trailing 'and' completes the sentence properly and avoids confusion.

× I usually chat with my friends about our daily life such as school, work or hobbies.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives such as school, work, or hobbies.

The phrase 'daily life' should be pluralized to 'daily lives' to correctly refer to the individual daily experiences of multiple people. Also, commas are needed before 'or' in a list for clarity.

× We often share funny stories or discuss about recent recently released movies and the music that we enjoy.

✓ We often share funny stories or discuss recent movies and the music that we enjoy.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'recently released' is redundant with 'recent'; 'recent movies' suffices. Removing 'about' and 'recently released' corrects the sentence.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows more genuine and effective interaction.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows more genuine and effective interaction.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb or adjective. This is a standard grammatical convention to improve readability and correctness.

× For instance. Umm, discussing important matters is often clearer clearer.

✓ For instance, discussing important matters is often clearer.

The sentence has a repeated word 'clearer' and an incorrect period after 'For instance'. The filler 'Umm' is unnecessary in written form. Correcting punctuation and removing repetition improves clarity and correctness.