Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如'informations'应为'information'，且表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和口语填充词，使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps strengthen our relationships and allows us to share interesting information. For example, after school, I often chat online or send text messages to keep in touch.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且用词不当，如'throw up the sadness'。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，避免直译，表达更自然。

例: We usually talk about our studies and future plans. Sometimes, when we want to relax, we chat about interesting news or social media, which helps me reduce stress and feel happier.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如'I so depressed'应为'I'm so depressed'，'it can very happy'表达不完整。建议注意语法和句子完整性，使用更准确的表达。

例: It depends on my mood. When I'm feeling down, I prefer talking to one friend who can encourage me. But when I'm happy, I enjoy chatting with a group because it makes me feel even better.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅，如'stay connect'应为'stay connected'，'go aboard'应为'go abroad'。建议注意词汇拼写和语法，表达更自然。

例: Honestly, I like both. When I go abroad, I use my smartphone to stay connected with my family. However, face-to-face communication is important because it helps us understand each other's emotions and attitudes.

提案: 回答中语法错误和表达不够自然，如'have argument'应为'have arguments'，'instead to argue'应为'instead of arguing'。建议注意语法和表达的准确性。

例: I rarely argue with my friends because it can harm our relationships. Instead, I prefer to explain my point of view and have serious conversations when we disagree.

× Definitely, I always like chatting with my friend because it can strengthen our relationship and, uh, exchange many interesting informations and help each other to improve.

✓ Definitely, I always like chatting with my friends because it can strengthen our relationship and, uh, exchange much interesting information and help each other to improve.

“friend”应为复数形式“friends”，因为通常会和多个朋友聊天。“informations”是不可数名词，应该用“information”。

× So exam for example, after the school, I always uh, make a online chatting or send text messages with my friends.

✓ So, for example, after school, I always, uh, have an online chat or send text messages to my friends.

“exam for example”应为“for example”；“after the school”应为“after school”；“make a online chatting”表达不正确，应为“have an online chat”；“send text messages with my friends”应为“send text messages to my friends”。

× Most of the time we always chatting about the study and the future plan.

✓ Most of the time we are always chatting about our studies and future plans.

“we always chatting”缺少助动词，应为“we are always chatting”；“the study”应为复数“our studies”；“the future plan”应为复数“future plans”。

× Sometimes if you want to cheer up or at the restaurant we always just chatting some interesting news and social media.

✓ Sometimes, if you want to cheer up or at the restaurant, we are always just chatting about some interesting news and social media.

“we always just chatting”缺少助动词，应为“we are always just chatting”；“chatting some interesting news”应为“chatting about some interesting news”。

× It always can reduce my stress and uh, help me to throw up the sadness.

✓ It can always reduce my stress and, uh, help me to get rid of the sadness.

“throw up the sadness”表达不正确，应为“get rid of the sadness”；“always”位置调整更自然。

× If I so depressed I just want to talk with one person because she can encourage me and give me advice.

✓ If I am so depressed, I just want to talk with one person because she can encourage me and give me advice.

缺少动词“am”；“so depressed”前应加“am”。

× But when I feel delightful I prefer chatting with group, it can very happy.

✓ But when I feel delightful, I prefer chatting with a group; it can be very enjoyable.

“chatting with group”应为“chatting with a group”；“it can very happy”缺少动词，应为“it can be very enjoyable”；句子应分开或用分号连接。

× To be honest, I like both of them when I just, uh, go aboard.

✓ To be honest, I like both of them when I just, uh, go abroad.

“go aboard”应为“go abroad”，意思是“出国”。

× I can stay connect with my family with my smartphone, but sometimes we need still need some face to face chance to communicate each other because we can know their emotions and their attitude.

✓ I can stay connected with my family with my smartphone, but sometimes we still need some face-to-face opportunities to communicate with each other because we can understand their emotions and attitudes.

“stay connect”应为“stay connected”；“need still need”重复，应为“still need”；“face to face chance”应为“face-to-face opportunities”；“communicate each other”应为“communicate with each other”；“know their emotions and their attitude”更自然表达为“understand their emotions and attitudes”。

× I rarely have argument with my friend because it can damage our relationships, so I prefer to explain and uh, have a serious conversation with them instead to argue because we have different views.

✓ I rarely have arguments with my friends because they can damage our relationships, so I prefer to explain and, uh, have serious conversations with them instead of arguing because we have different views.

“have argument”应为复数“have arguments”；“my friend”应为复数“my friends”；“it can damage”应为“they can damage”；“have a serious conversation”应为复数“have serious conversations”；“instead to argue”应为“instead of arguing”。