Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your sentences concise and relevant.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts. For example, after a long day, we often talk about our experiences and funny stories, which always lifts my mood and strengthens our relationship.

提案: Improve your grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'for example' and 'in addition' appropriately to make your answer coherent and logical.

例: I usually discuss various topics with my friends, such as our daily lives, experiences, music, and personal interests. For example, we often share updates about our dreams and future plans. In addition, we sometimes talk about movies we have recently watched or places we would like to visit together.

提案: Focus on correct verb agreement and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'personal talk'.

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend rather than a group because one-on-one conversations tend to be more meaningful and allow for a deeper connection. For example, I can share personal thoughts more comfortably without the distractions that often come with group discussions.

提案: Clarify your answer by using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid unclear phrases and explain your preference clearly with examples.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for genuine and effective interaction. When talking in person, I can see facial expressions and body language, which help me understand the other person better. For example, important conversations feel more personal and meaningful when done face-to-face.

提案: Improve your grammar and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Be specific with your examples and avoid vague phrases.

例: Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics. However, these arguments are usually friendly and help us understand each other better. For example, we often debate movies or current events, which lead to interesting discussions rather than conflicts.

× For example, after a long day talking about our experience, our funny stories, always my mood, it always changes our relationship by keeping us connected.

✓ For example, after a long day of talking about our experiences and funny stories, my mood always changes, and it helps keep our relationship connected.

The original sentence has unclear structure and missing connectors, making it hard to understand. Adding conjunctions and correcting word order improves clarity and coherence.

× I usually discuss various topic with my friends, such as our daily lives, experience, music and personal interests.

✓ I usually discuss various topics with my friends, such as our daily lives, experiences, music, and personal interests.

The word 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to agree with 'various'. Also, 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match the list.

× In addition, we sometimes talk about movies we have recently watched or places will we would like to visit together in the future.

✓ In addition, we sometimes talk about movies we have recently watched or places we would like to visit together in the future.

The phrase 'will we would like' is incorrect; 'we would like' is the correct future expression here.

× Conversation with one person tend to be more meaningful and allowed for a deeper connection and understanding.

✓ Conversation with one person tends to be more meaningful and allows for a deeper connection and understanding.

The singular subject 'Conversation' requires the singular verb 'tends' and 'allows' to agree in number.

× I can share personal talk more comfortably without the distraction that often come with the group discussion.

✓ I can share personal talks more comfortably without the distractions that often come with group discussions.

'Personal talk' should be plural 'personal talks' to match the context, and 'distraction' should be plural 'distractions' to agree with 'come'. Also, 'group discussion' should be plural 'group discussions'.

× I prefer to communicate piece to piece because it allows for me genuine and effective interaction.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me genuine and effective interaction.

The phrase 'piece to piece' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'face to face'. Also, 'allows for me' should be 'allows me'.

× When talking in person I can with special expression and body language which helps me understand the better person better.

✓ When talking in person, I can use special expressions and body language, which helps me understand the other person better.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'use' and has awkward phrasing. Adding 'use' and correcting word order improves clarity.

× For example, doing important conversation by stupid communication feels more personal and.

✓ For example, having important conversations in person feels more personal and effective.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Rewriting it with proper structure and word choice clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have a different opinion on important topic.

✓ Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics.

'Opinion' and 'topic' should be plural to agree with 'different' and the context.

× For example, we make a debate about movie or current event, which often lead to interesting discussion rather than conflicts.

✓ For example, we have debates about movies or current events, which often lead to interesting discussions rather than conflicts.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and singular/plural mismatches. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy and clarity.