Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Mejora la claridad y la gramática en tus respuestas. Evita frases confusas y redundantes, y usa oraciones completas y coherentes para expresar tus ideas claramente.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because we can talk about many different topics, from daily life to interesting stories, which makes our conversations fun and engaging.

提案: Organiza mejor tus ideas y usa vocabulario más preciso. Evita palabras vagas y trata de dar ejemplos claros y específicos para que tu respuesta sea más comprensible.

例: Usually, I chat with my friends about common interests like movies, superheroes, and personal experiences, which helps us connect and share our opinions.

提案: Mejora la estructura de tus oraciones y usa conectores para que tus ideas fluyan mejor. Explica claramente tus preferencias y las razones detrás de ellas.

例: I usually prefer chatting with one friend because it's easier to have a meaningful conversation, but I can also enjoy group chats when the situation requires it.

提案: Clarifica tus ideas y evita frases confusas. Usa oraciones completas y conecta tus ideas con palabras como 'however' o 'but' para expresar comparaciones o preferencias.

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it's convenient, but I also believe face-to-face communication is better for important conversations.

提案: Evita muletillas y repeticiones. Organiza tus ideas para expresar claramente que aunque hay diferencias, no suelen causar conflictos.

例: I don't usually argue with my friends. Although we sometimes have different opinions, we respect each other's views and avoid conflicts.

× Yes, everyone like it the most.

✓ Yes, everyone likes it the most.

The subject 'everyone' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'likes' instead of 'like'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× They like most about that.

✓ They like that the most.

The phrase 'like most about that' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'like that the most'. Also, 'They' is plural and matches with 'like', so no verb change is needed here.

× Dealing with friends was the idea that we can talk every topic that we know it, or also even things more.

✓ The idea of dealing with friends is that we can talk about every topic we know, or even more.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Dealing with friends was the idea' is incorrect; it should be 'The idea of dealing with friends is'. Also, 'talk every topic that we know it' is incorrect; it should be 'talk about every topic we know'. The sentence structure needs to be corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Umm, like a sitcom. More good than any things.

✓ Umm, like a sitcom. Better than anything else.

'More good' is incorrect; the comparative form of 'good' is 'better'. Also, 'any things' should be 'anything else' for correct usage.

× Who she need talks of topics or things that really are common, like a umm, fanatics, something like that.

✓ She needs to talk about topics or things that are really common, like, umm, fanatics, something like that.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement errors: 'she need talks' is incorrect; it should be 'she needs to talk'. Also, 'talks of topics' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'talk about topics'.

× But most and also most of the time it's talk about to any things and also superheroes, uh, cinema and also personal.

✓ But most of the time, we talk about anything, including superheroes, cinema, and personal topics.

The phrase 'talk about to any things' is incorrect; 'talk about' does not require 'to', and 'any things' should be 'anything'. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× I think most of the times we know only friend because in the group can be entire people that you don't really hanging out or even tolerated and each other.

✓ I think most of the time we know only one friend because in a group there can be people you don't really hang out with or even tolerate each other.

'Most of the times' should be 'most of the time' (time is uncountable here). 'Only friend' should be 'only one friend'. 'Can be entire people' is awkward; 'there can be people' is correct. 'Hanging out' should be 'hang out with'. 'Tolerated and each other' is incorrect; it should be 'tolerate each other'.

× So yeah, I prefer with only one friend, but if the situations requires that the child will be in a group, I'll be able to do it.

✓ So yeah, I prefer to be with only one friend, but if the situation requires me to be in a group, I'll be able to do it.

'Prefer with' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to be with'. 'Situations requires' should be 'situation requires' (singular). 'The child will be in a group' is unclear; 'me to be in a group' fits better. Modal verb 'will' is acceptable but the sentence is improved for clarity.

× I think camping for communicating with the via social media, but they can be successful when the communication face to face I don't really important so I prefer social media, but there'll be reasons that the face to face can be a better choice or the social media instead of face to face have the best choice.

✓ I think communicating via social media is convenient, but communication face to face can be more successful. I don't think it's very important, so I prefer social media, but there are reasons why face to face can be a better choice than social media.

The original sentence has many errors: 'camping for communicating with the via social media' is incorrect; it should be 'communicating via social media'. 'They can be successful when the communication face to face' is ungrammatical; it should be 'communication face to face can be more successful'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× With friends, not really, uh, of course, can we have, uh, different points of view about something, but doesn't mean that, uh, everything, uh, resonated with that will be ended with a discussion or a fight or any situation like that.

✓ With friends, not really. Of course, we can have different points of view about something, but that doesn't mean that everything related to that will end with a discussion, a fight, or any situation like that.

The modal verb 'can' is misplaced in the original sentence. It should be 'we can have'. 'Resonated with that will be ended' is incorrect; it should be 'related to that will end'. The sentence is corrected for modal verb usage and clarity.