Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и избегать повторений. Например, не нужно дважды говорить "with my friends". Также слово "chilling" не совсем подходит в данном контексте, лучше использовать "relaxing" или "enjoyable".

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because spending time with them is very relaxing.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует использовать правильные предлоги и формы слов, например, "give advice" вместо "advices". Также стоит использовать связующие слова для логичности.

例: Usually, we talk about our recent news and events, and we often give each other advice in different situations.

提案: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и словоупотреблении, например, "your group" вместо "a group", "one only one friend" вместо "only one friend", "depends of situation" вместо "depends on the situation". Следует использовать правильные выражения и связующие слова.

例: Sometimes I prefer chatting with a group, and sometimes I like talking to only one friend. It depends on the situation.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать правильные предлоги и местоимения, а также более четко выражать мысли. Например, "it helps me understand people better and feel closer to them".

例: I always prefer to communicate face-to-face because it helps me understand people better and feel closer to them. I don't like communicating via social media.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует использовать правильные конструкции, например, "It depends on the situation" и "If they give good advice, I agree with them."

例: It depends on the situation. If my friends give good advice, I usually agree with them.

× When I spend time with them with my friends, it is very chilling.

✓ When I spend time with my friends, it is very chilling.

The phrase 'with them with my friends' is redundant and incorrect. The preposition 'with' should be used only once to indicate spending time together. Remove the extra 'with them' to correct the sentence.

× Usually we chat with my friends about our news and what happened with us and we can give others advices in different situations.

✓ Usually we chat about our news and what happened to us, and we can give others advice in different situations.

The phrase 'chat with my friends' is redundant since 'we' already includes the friends. Also, 'advices' is incorrect because 'advice' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. The preposition 'happened with us' should be 'happened to us'.

× Sometimes I prefer chat with your group, sometimes with one only one friend.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to chat with a group, sometimes with only one friend.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect here; it should be 'a' to indicate any group. Also, 'prefer chat' is missing 'to' before the verb. The phrase 'one only one friend' is redundant; 'only one friend' suffices.

× It depends of situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The verb 'depend' is followed by the preposition 'on', not 'of'. Also, 'situation' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the particular situation.

× I always prefer to communicate face to face because it is a help to understand these people and to be closer to him and I don't like via social media where I can see.

✓ I always prefer to communicate face to face because it helps me understand people and be closer to them, and I don't like communicating via social media where I cannot see them.

The phrase 'it is a help to understand' is awkward; 'it helps me understand' is better. 'These people' and 'him' are inconsistent; 'people' is plural, so 'them' should be used. The phrase 'I don't like via social media where I can see' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify 'communicating via social media where I cannot see them'.

× It depends the situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The verb 'depend' requires the preposition 'on' before its object. Missing 'on' causes the sentence to be grammatically incorrect.

× If they are give a good advice to a solution, yes I can agree with them.

✓ If they give good advice for a solution, yes, I can agree with them.

The phrase 'are give' is incorrect; the correct form is 'give'. Also, 'a good advice' is incorrect because 'advice' is uncountable and should not have an article. The preposition 'to' should be 'for' in this context.