Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, bạn nên dùng thì hiện tại đơn "enjoy" thay vì "enjoyed" vì đây là thói quen. Ngoài ra, câu "talking about our experiences or funny stories always leave my mood" nên sửa thành "always lifts my mood" để chính xác và tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts. For example, after a long day, talking about our experiences or funny stories always lifts my mood. It also strengthens our relationships by keeping us connected.

提案: Bạn trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng cần tránh dùng câu hỏi "Are you sure?" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Ngoài ra, chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều/số ít như "This conversation help" nên là "helps". Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as school, work, or hobbies. For example, we often share updates about movies we've watched or places we'd like to visit. These conversations help us stay connected and understand each other better.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng và ngữ pháp như "With talking one-on-one" nên là "When talking one-on-one" và "per on" là lỗi đánh máy. Hãy chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ chính xác để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations. When talking one-on-one, it's easier to focus on the other person's feelings and thoughts, which helps build a strong connection. For example, I often find that I can share personal experiences more comfortably in a private setting.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời đúng câu hỏi về việc bạn thích giao tiếp trực tiếp hay qua mạng xã hội. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp lại câu trả lời trước đó. Ngoài ra, cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng như "serious" nên là "easier" và "chatting on and on" không rõ nghĩa.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to read facial expressions and body language, which makes conversations more meaningful. For example, when we talk in person, I feel more connected and can understand my friend's feelings better.

提案: Bạn có vẻ nhầm lẫn giữa "agree" và "argue" trong câu trả lời. Ngoài ra, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng như "say things from new angers first" không rõ nghĩa. Hãy trả lời đúng câu hỏi, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trả lời rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics. However, these disagreements usually don't last long because they help us understand each other better. For example, we might debate about movies or current events, which leads to interesting and lively conversations rather than serious conflicts.

× Yes, I really enjoyed chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts.

The sentence mixes past tense 'enjoyed' with present tense 'helps'. Since the context is about a general habit, present tense 'enjoy' should be used to maintain consistency.

× For example, after a long day, talking about our experiences or funny stories always leave my mood.

✓ For example, after a long day, talking about our experiences or funny stories always lifts my mood.

The verb 'leave' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'lifts' to express improving mood. Also, 'leave my mood' is incorrect collocation; 'lift my mood' is the proper phrase.

× It always strengthens our relationships be by keeping us connected.

✓ It always strengthens our relationships by keeping us connected.

The word 'be' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Removing 'be' corrects the sentence structure.

× This conversation help us stay connected and understand each other better.

✓ This conversation helps us stay connected and understand each other better.

The subject 'conversation' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' to agree in number.

× With talking one-on-one, it's easier to focus on the per on the other person's feelings and thoughts, which helps build a strong connection.

✓ When talking one-on-one, it's easier to focus on the other person's feelings and thoughts, which helps build a strong connection.

The phrase 'With talking one-on-one' is awkward and incorrect; 'When talking one-on-one' is the correct structure. Also, 'per on' is a typo and should be 'person' or omitted.

× When chatting on and on, it's serious to focus fully on the other person's feelings and thoughts, which helps build a stronger connection between us.

✓ When chatting one-on-one, it's easier to focus fully on the other person's feelings and thoughts, which helps build a stronger connection between us.

The phrase 'chatting on and on' is incorrect; it should be 'chatting one-on-one' to match the intended meaning. Also, 'serious' is incorrect here; 'easier' fits the context.

× Yes, I occasionally agree with friends, especially when we have different perspectives on important topics.

✓ Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different perspectives on important topics.

The original sentence uses 'agree' which contradicts the question about arguing. The correct verb is 'argue' to answer appropriately.

× Disagreements usually don't last long because they help us understand each other better and say things from new angers first.

✓ Disagreements usually don't last long because they help us understand each other better and express things from new angles first.

The phrase 'say things from new angers' is incorrect; it should be 'express things from new angles' to convey the intended meaning.

× Then we might debate about movies or current events, which offer leads to interesting and lively conversation rather than serious.

✓ Then we might debate about movies or current events, which leads to interesting and lively conversations rather than serious ones.

The phrase 'offer leads to' is incorrect; 'leads to' is correct. Also, 'conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match 'interesting and lively', and 'rather than serious' should be 'rather than serious ones' for clarity.