Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Спробуйте уникати граматичних помилок і зробити відповідь більш природною та лаконічною. Наприклад, замініть "most liked by me a way" на "my favorite way" і використовуйте правильні форми дієслів, наприклад, "I sometimes get confused".

例: Yes, I like chatting with friends. To be honest, it's my favorite way to communicate because I'm an introvert and find it a bit hard to call someone and speak directly. Sometimes, I get confused and don't know what to say.

提案: Потрібно відповідати більш чітко і логічно, уникаючи зайвих пауз і повторів. Використовуйте зв'язки для кращої структури відповіді і конкретизуйте теми розмов.

例: I usually chat about how they are doing, any new events in their lives, school updates, and sometimes even the weather.

提案: Покращіть зв'язність і граматику, уникайте повторів і неповних речень. Використовуйте зв'язки для логічного викладу думок.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it's like a real dialogue where I ask questions and my friend answers. In group chats, it's sometimes hard to concentrate because everyone talks at the same time.

提案: Уникайте повторів і покращуйте граматику. Зробіть відповідь більш плавною і природною, використовуючи зв'язки для пояснення переваг.

例: As an introvert, social media is probably better for me, but I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows not only conversation but also activities like walking and hanging out together, which is more fun.

提案: Уникайте зайвих пауз і повторів, використовуйте більш точні вирази. Зробіть відповідь більш структурованою і природною.

例: I usually don't argue with friends because I don't like conflicts. However, if an argument happens, I try to resolve it quickly.

× To be honest it is most liked by me a way to communicate with the people because I'm introvert and it's a little bit hard for me just to call someone and speak.

✓ To be honest, it is the way I like most to communicate with people because I'm an introvert and it's a little bit hard for me just to call someone and speak.

The phrase 'most liked by me a way' has incorrect word order. The correct order is 'the way I like most'. Also, 'the people' should be 'people' without 'the' here, and 'I'm introvert' needs the article 'an' before 'introvert'.

× I sometimes getting confused and don't know how to do that.

✓ I sometimes get confused and don't know how to do that.

The verb 'getting' is incorrectly used here; the simple present tense 'get' should be used to express habitual action. 'Sometimes' indicates a repeated action, so simple present is appropriate.

× For example, how does it go with them? Uh, is there something new happened with them?

✓ For example, how is it going with them? Uh, has something new happened to them?

The phrase 'how does it go with them' is unnatural; 'how is it going with them' is correct. Also, 'is there something new happened' is incorrect; the present perfect 'has something new happened' is appropriate. 'Happened with them' should be 'happened to them'.

× Yeah. How does it go with school? How even the weather is well, well, is that do they have?

✓ Yeah. How is it going with school? How is the weather? What kind of weather do they have?

Similar to previous, 'how does it go with school' should be 'how is it going with school'. The phrase 'how even the weather is well, well, is that do they have?' is ungrammatical and unclear; it is corrected to 'How is the weather? What kind of weather do they have?' for clarity and correctness.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because there is only like it's a dialogue in real life because for example I'm asking and a friend is answering.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because it is like a dialogue in real life; for example, I ask and a friend answers.

The phrase 'there is only like it's a dialogue' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'it is like a dialogue'. Also, 'I'm asking and a friend is answering' is better as 'I ask and a friend answers' to express habitual action.

× And in a group chat it's always sometimes hard to concentrate on the confirmation because everyone has their own.

✓ And in a group chat, it's sometimes hard to concentrate on the conversation because everyone has their own.

The word 'confirmation' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'conversation'. Also, 'it's always sometimes' is contradictory; 'sometimes' alone suffices.

× I'm introvert, so why are social media probably the better variant for me?

✓ I'm an introvert, so social media is probably the better option for me.

'I'm introvert' needs the article 'an'. 'Why are social media' is incorrect; it should be 'social media is' because 'social media' is treated as singular. 'Variant' is less natural here than 'option'.

× if you're, uh, speaking face to face, I mean, have a conversation face to face, you're not only have a conversation, you can walk together, you can hang out, you can have a fun a lot.

✓ If you're speaking face to face, I mean, having a conversation face to face, you not only have a conversation, you can walk together, hang out, and have a lot of fun.

'You're not only have' is incorrect; it should be 'you not only have'. Also, 'have a fun a lot' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have a lot of fun'. The gerund 'having' is needed after 'I mean' to parallel 'speaking'.

× Uh, I would say no, it is not common thing for me to, to argue with someone, Uh, I don't like, umm, it.

✓ Uh, I would say no; it is not a common thing for me to argue with someone. Uh, I don't like it.

The phrase 'it is not common thing' is missing the article 'a'. Also, the sentence is fragmented; adding punctuation improves clarity. The modal 'would' is used correctly here.

× So even if it happens, I'm trying to solve this argument, this quarrel.

✓ So even if it happens, I try to resolve the argument or quarrel.

'I'm trying' suggests ongoing action, but here a habitual or general statement is better expressed with simple present 'I try'. Also, 'solve this argument' is unnatural; 'resolve the argument' is more appropriate.