Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ không cần thiết, làm cho câu trả lời không tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lặp lại từ và nói rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a long day at school.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp lại từ và câu không rõ ràng. Hãy cố gắng nói rõ ràng, mạch lạc và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời có tính logic hơn.

例: We usually chat about entertainment news and sports events because I find them interesting. Also, we love talking about Cartoon Network since it reminds me of my childhood.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi lặp từ. Bạn nên tập trung vào việc trình bày ý chính một cách mạch lạc và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share anything with her, like news about Archer or current events, which is more personal and comfortable.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn và tránh lặp lại câu. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích rõ hơn lý do bạn thích giao tiếp trực tiếp để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more interactive and allows us to express our feelings clearly and naturally.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn rất khó hiểu do nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lặp lại và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả.

例: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we misunderstand each other or have different opinions, especially about homework or interests.

× Absolutely yes, I really I really enjoy have a having a conversation with my friends because when I chatting, when I talking to them I feel relaxed and all I'm going after a long day at school.

✓ Absolutely yes, I really enjoy having a conversation with my friends because when I chat, when I talk to them I feel relaxed and refreshed after a long day at school.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the '-ing' form of the verb, so 'enjoy having' is correct. Also, 'when I chatting' and 'when I talking' are incorrect; the correct forms are 'when I chat' and 'when I talk' because these are simple present tense actions. Additionally, 'all I'm going' is unclear and likely a mistake; 'refreshed' fits the context better.

× Well, we all well, we usually chat about entertainment news, entertainment news and sports event because because they are all my favorite, because they are all my friends and I favorite.

✓ Well, we usually chat about entertainment news and sports events because they are all my favorites.

The sentence has repeated words and incorrect conjunction use. 'Because because' is redundant. Also, 'sports event' should be plural 'sports events' to match 'entertainment news'. The phrase 'because they are all my friends and I favorite' is incorrect and unclear; it should be simplified to 'because they are all my favorites'.

× And also we and also we really love to talk about Cartoon Network too, because it is because it is my childhood.

✓ Also, we really love to talk about Cartoon Network because it is part of my childhood.

The phrase 'And also we and also we' is repetitive and incorrect. 'Because it is because it is' is redundant. The sentence should be concise and clear.

× Personally, I prefer chat with only one friend rather rather than chat with the group of people because when I talk with only one friend, I can share any things about anything with her like Archer ******* or domestic news or international news.

✓ Personally, I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than chatting with a group of people because when I talk with only one friend, I can share anything with her like Archer ******* or domestic news or international news.

'Prefer' is usually followed by the '-ing' form when expressing general preferences, so 'prefer chatting' is correct. Also, 'any things about anything' is redundant; 'anything' suffices. 'The group of people' should be 'a group of people' for general reference.

× Also, when I talk to my best friend, uh, I feel that. I feel, I feel, I feel.

✓ Also, when I talk to my best friend, I feel comfortable and understood.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive. It needs a clear complement to 'I feel' to express the emotion or state.

× Absolutely. I prefer to come to communicate face to face because it is searchable and interactive.

✓ Absolutely. I prefer to communicate face to face because it is searchable and interactive.

The phrase 'prefer to come to communicate' is incorrect; 'prefer to communicate' is correct. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' but is acceptable as is. 'Searchable' may be a misuse; possibly 'searchable' is intended as 'searchable' but contextually 'searchable' is unclear; however, correction focuses on preposition misuse.

× Also, we can talk. We can talk lively to whatever we like or we don't like.

✓ Also, we can talk lively about whatever we like or don't like.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'talk about' is the correct collocation. Also, 'we don't like' is better without 'we' repeated.

× Sometimes I argue with my friends because we all miss and miss because we all misunderstood because we understood misunderstood another when, when and we also And sometimes we have a Givens on homework or something we don't really or something my friends are keen on, but I'm but I'm not really like.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends because we all misunderstand each other. Also, sometimes we have disagreements on homework or things my friends are keen on, but I don't really like.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'miss and miss' is incorrect; likely intended 'misunderstand'. 'Misunderstood' is past tense but context requires present tense 'misunderstand'. 'Givens' is incorrect; likely 'disagreements'. The sentence is fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.