Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we often exchange new ideas. Additionally, sharing meals together makes the experience very pleasant.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免句子结构重复。

例: We usually chat about various topics, such as our family relationships, the best food we've tried, and our future plans. For instance, we often discuss where to travel next and what activities we'd like to do. Moreover, we keep in touch through our phones.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，使用恰当的连接词，使表达更清晰自然。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I enjoy having deep and personal conversations. In contrast, group chats involve many ideas and require waiting, which can be time-consuming.

提案: 回答中存在人称错误和表达不自然，建议注意人称一致，使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows us to see each other's expressions. This makes it easier to understand feelings and have deeper conversations.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Normally, I don't argue with my friends, but sometimes we do because of different opinions. We discuss and argue to decide which idea is better. In this way, arguing can be important for true friendship.

× Yes, I like to chat with friends because usually I can I got some new ideas from each other.

✓ Yes, I like to chat with friends because usually we can get some new ideas from each other.

这里的主语是复数“we”，所以动词应该用复数形式“can get”，而不是“I can I got”，且“got”是过去式，时态不匹配。应使用一般现在时。

× At the same time we can enjoy our lunch or dinner together that make us very pleasant.

✓ At the same time, we can enjoy our lunch or dinner together, which makes us very happy.

原句中“that make us very pleasant”结构不完整且用词不当，应使用关系代词“which”引导定语从句，动词用第三人称单数“makes”，且“pleasant”形容词用法不当，改为“happy”更自然。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I I like to chat personally.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I like to chat personally.

句中“I I”重复，应删除多余的“I”。

× We can talk more things deeply, but if we I choose to chat with a group of people, we have many ideas we need to exchange and wait.

✓ We can talk about more things deeply, but if I choose to chat with a group of people, we have many ideas that we need to exchange and wait for.

“talk more things”缺少介词，应为“talk about more things”；“if we I choose”主语不一致，应为“I choose”；“ideas we need to exchange and wait”缺少连接词和介词，应为“ideas that we need to exchange and wait for”。

× That's need a lot of time.

✓ That needs a lot of time.

“That's”是“that is”的缩写，主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，改为“needs”。

× He preferred to communicate face to face because it offers us a good way to talk and see from each other.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it offers us a good way to talk and see each other.

回答者应使用第一人称“I”，且时态应与问题一致用一般现在时“prefer”，而非过去时“preferred”。“see from each other”表达错误，应为“see each other”。

× He preferred to communicate face to face because it offers us a good way to talk and see from each other.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it offers us a good way to talk and see each other.

“see from each other”中的介词“from”使用错误，正确表达是“see each other”。

× It's obvious to find the feeling of each other and we can have a deep conversation too.

✓ It's obvious to feel each other's feelings and we can have a deep conversation too.

“find the feeling of each other”表达不自然，应改为“feel each other's feelings”，更符合英语习惯。

× I would say normally I I don't argue with friends but sometimes I will argue with them because we have totally different ideas so we need to talk and argue.

✓ I would say normally I don't argue with friends, but sometimes I do argue with them because we have totally different ideas, so we need to talk and argue.

“sometimes I will argue”时态不自然，改为“sometimes I do argue”更符合口语表达。

× Then we will decide which which idea is better.

✓ Then we will decide which idea is better.

“which which”重复，应删除多余的“which”。

× So sometimes argue is important for real friends.

✓ So sometimes arguing is important for real friends.

“argue”作为名词使用不正确，应使用动名词“arguing”。