Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ lặp lại như "uh". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về lý do bạn thích trò chuyện với bạn bè.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they are very open and fun to talk to. We always have interesting conversations that make me feel happy.

提案: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh sử dụng các từ ngữ không liên quan hoặc lặp lại. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời của bạn logic và cụ thể hơn.

例: Usually, we chat about our favorite foods, our experiences with good and bad friends, and sometimes we talk about boys we find attractive.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngập ngừng như "uh" và "umm". Hãy giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích trò chuyện với một người bạn duy nhất một cách tự nhiên và mạch lạc.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I find it easier to have a meaningful conversation. Also, I don't have a girlfriend, so I enjoy one-on-one chats more.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và tránh các từ ngập ngừng. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và giải thích cụ thể lý do bạn thích giao tiếp trực tiếp.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more comfortable and personal for both me and my friends.

提案: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn. Tránh sử dụng các từ ngập ngừng và cung cấp thêm chi tiết về việc bạn có hay không tranh luận với bạn bè và lý do tại sao.

例: Yes, sometimes we argue when we have different opinions, but we always try to understand each other and make up quickly.

× Yes, I do, because my friend is, uh, very, uh, crazy. And a very open new friend, Yeah.

✓ Yes, I do, because my friends are, uh, very, uh, crazy and very open new friends, yeah.

The student uses 'my friend' and then refers to 'a very open new friend' which is inconsistent. Since the question is about chatting with friends (plural), the plural form 'friends' should be used to match the context. This is a singular and plural issue.

× Yes, I do, because my friend is, uh, very, uh, crazy. And a very open new friend, Yeah.

✓ Yes, I do, because my friend is, uh, very, uh, crazy and a very open new friend, yeah.

Starting a sentence with 'And' in this context is incorrect conjunction use. The two ideas should be connected with 'and' within the same sentence for better grammar and flow.

× Are we touching the, uh, food friends, Bad friend, good friend and, uh boy, uh, handsome boy, yeah.

✓ We usually talk about food, bad friends, good friends, and boys, especially handsome boys, yeah.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear, lacking proper sentence structure. The correction provides a clear, complete sentence with proper subject and verb, improving clarity and grammar.

× Are we touching the, uh, food friends, Bad friend, good friend and, uh boy, uh, handsome boy, yeah.

✓ We usually talk about food, bad friends, good friends, and boys, especially handsome boys, yeah.

The student mixes singular and plural forms inconsistently ('bad friend' and 'good friend' should be plural to match 'friends'). Correct plural forms are necessary for grammatical agreement.

× I prefer, uh, chatting with only one friend because uh, this uh, because umm, I'm umm, I'm uh, I'm don't have a girlfriend. Also sad. OK.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because, uh, I don't have a girlfriend. It's also sad. OK.

The phrase 'I'm don't have' is incorrect pronoun and verb usage. The correct form is 'I don't have'. Also, 'this uh, because umm' is unnecessary and confusing, so it is removed for clarity.

× I prefer, uh, face to face, uh, because this is, uh, if comfort, comfortable for me and for my friend. Yeah, thank you.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it is comfortable for me and my friend. Yeah, thank you.

The phrase 'if comfort, comfortable' is incorrect. The correct preposition and adjective usage is 'it is comfortable'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× Yes, we also agree with friend, but uh, umm yeah, I don't know.

✓ Yes, we also agree with friends, but uh, umm yeah, I don't know.

The singular 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of talking about multiple friends. This is a singular and plural issue.