Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but a bit repetitive and some sentences are grammatically incorrect or awkward. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'so' multiple times, use 'because' or 'therefore'.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share my daily experiences. It clears my mind and is a good way to have fun and laugh together.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and be specific about the topics you discuss. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Usually, I talk about my daily activities, such as what I studied and where I went. Sometimes, we also discuss various other topics, like current events or hobbies.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons for your preference.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to hear different experiences and share my own stories. This way, I can learn from various perspectives.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid repeating words and finish your sentences. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary to express your ideas.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read the other person's facial expressions and emotions, which adds meaning to their words and helps me understand them better.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains filler words like 'uh' and some awkward phrasing. Try to speak more fluently and use clearer expressions. Also, explain your approach to disagreements more specifically.

例: I rarely argue with my friends because I prefer to listen to their opinions carefully. If we have different views, I try to understand their perspective before responding.

× OK so I usually chat about what my friends is what I did all day long, like how my day been, how what did I study, where did I go?

✓ OK so I usually chat about what my friends are, what I did all day long, like how my day has been, what I studied, where I went.

The verb 'is' does not agree with the plural subject 'my friends'. It should be 'are'. Also, 'how my day been' is missing the auxiliary verb 'has' to form the present perfect tense: 'how my day has been'. 'What did I study' should be 'what I studied' to fit the statement form. 'Where did I go' should be 'where I went' for the same reason.

× It's really good to have a front end to chat with.

✓ It's really good to have a friend to chat with.

The word 'front end' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'friend'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but it affects clarity.

× I do like to chat with a group of people because to hear everyone start about how their lives go in and to share my my stories with them and to get different types of feedbacks.

✓ I do like to chat with a group of people because I get to hear everyone start talking about how their lives go and to share my stories with them and to get different types of feedback.

The phrase 'everyone start' should be 'everyone starts' to agree with the singular subject 'everyone'. Also, 'feedbacks' is incorrect because 'feedback' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized.

× Well, I do prefer communication face to face because when we chat face to face, I can know what the speaker or the listener is feeling or I can read their emotions through their faces and it it gives a lot construct contrast to the words.

✓ Well, I do prefer communication face to face because when we chat face to face, I can know what the speaker or the listener is feeling or I can read their emotions through their faces and it gives a lot of contrast to the words.

The phrase 'a lot construct contrast' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'a lot of contrast'. The preposition 'of' is necessary to link 'a lot' with 'contrast'.

× If I ever have contradicting opinions, uh, I just listen to what others have to say and do according to it.

✓ If I ever have contradicting opinions, uh, I just listen to what others have to say and act accordingly.

The phrase 'do according to it' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'act accordingly' to mean responding appropriately to the situation.