Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct verb forms for natural English.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I feel stressed, because communicating with them helps me relax and feel more at ease.

提案: Be careful with word choice; 'cheat' is incorrect here. Use appropriate vocabulary like 'share'. Also, avoid repetition and use linking words to organize your ideas clearly.

例: Actually, we share many things with each other, such as our lives, school pressures, jobs, and family matters, which makes chatting with them very enjoyable.

提案: Improve grammar and sentence structure, avoid repetition, and use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than a group because one-to-one conversations allow me to focus more on the person and listen to their stories carefully.

提案: Avoid filler words and incorrect phrases. Use correct comparative forms and clarify your examples. Also, improve sentence fluency and coherence.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication rather than social media because it is easier to connect emotionally. For example, when I talk with my friends in person, I feel happier than when chatting online.

提案: Correct grammar mistakes and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and express your opinion clearly.

例: I haven't argued with my friends before, but I believe that having conflicts can help build and develop relationships because during conflicts, we understand each other's thoughts and needs better.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends especially uh when I feeling stressed because I like to communicate with others and I feel like so relaxed during communicate with my friends.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends especially when I feel stressed because I like to communicate with others and I feel so relaxed during communicating with my friends.

The verb 'feeling' should be in the base form 'feel' to agree with the present tense 'I'. Also, 'during communicate' is incorrect; it should be 'during communicating' because 'during' is followed by a gerund (verb + -ing). This correction ensures proper verb tense and form usage.

× Actually, we cheat a lot of things with each other like our lives, our our pressure of school, our jobs, our families and because they are my friends, I like to chat a lot of things with them and it is enjoyable.

✓ Actually, we chat about a lot of things with each other like our lives, our pressure from school, our jobs, our families and because they are my friends, I like to chat about a lot of things with them and it is enjoyable.

The word 'cheat' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'chat'. Also, 'pressure of school' should be 'pressure from school' to use the correct preposition. These changes correct the verb choice and preposition usage for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend instead of a group of people because I enjoyed to 1 to one conversation.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend instead of a group of people because I enjoy one-to-one conversation.

The verb 'enjoyed' is past tense but the sentence is in present tense context, so it should be 'enjoy'. Also, 'to 1 to one conversation' is incorrect; it should be 'one-to-one conversation' as a noun phrase. This correction aligns verb tense and fixes phrase structure.

× It's like I can I can be more attention to only one person and I like to hear about their stories.

✓ It's like I can pay more attention to only one person and I like to hear about their stories.

The phrase 'be more attention' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'pay more attention'. This correction fixes the verb phrase to properly express the intended meaning.

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than communicate on social media because I think it is more easier to connect with each other of emotion.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than communicate on social media because I think it is easier to connect with each other emotionally.

The phrase 'more easier' is incorrect; 'easier' alone suffices. Also, 'connect with each other of emotion' is incorrect; it should be 'connect with each other emotionally' to use the correct adverb form. These corrections improve adjective and preposition usage.

× For example, uh, every time I communicate with my friends on of face to face, I will feel like more happier than on children.

✓ For example, every time I communicate with my friends face to face, I feel happier than on social media.

The phrase 'on of face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'face to face'. Also, 'more happier' is incorrect; 'happier' alone is correct. The phrase 'than on children' is unclear and likely a mistake; 'than on social media' fits the context better. These corrections fix preposition use, comparative adjective, and clarity.

× I was said, I haven't experienced of arguing with my friends, but I think having conflict is good for building a relationship or developing a relationship because, uh, during the conflict, you know what each other's thinking and what they really want.

✓ I would say I haven't experienced arguing with my friends, but I think having conflict is good for building or developing a relationship because during conflict, you know what each other is thinking and what they really want.

The phrase 'I was said' is incorrect; 'I would say' is appropriate. 'Experienced of arguing' should be 'experienced arguing' without 'of'. Also, 'each other's thinking' should be 'each other is thinking' to correctly express the idea. These corrections fix verb tense, preposition, and pronoun usage.