Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Perbaiki pengulangan kata dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta efektif. Hindari pengisian kata seperti 'uh' dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially sharing stories and having casual conversations about various topics.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren. Berikan detail yang lebih spesifik tentang topik pembicaraan.

例: I usually talk about random topics with my friend, but sometimes she shares updates about her busy schedule, which I find interesting to hear.

提案: Gunakan struktur kalimat yang lebih tepat dan variasi kosakata. Jelaskan alasan dengan kalimat yang lebih alami dan gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide.

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I feel more relaxed and comfortable, whereas group conversations can be overwhelming for me.

提案: Hindari pengisian kata seperti 'umm' dan perbaiki tata bahasa. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas dengan alasan yang spesifik.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see emotions and expressions, making the conversation more meaningful.

提案: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur. Gunakan linking words untuk menjelaskan contoh dengan jelas dan hindari pengulangan kata.

例: I sometimes argue with my friend, especially when we disagree on where to hang out. For instance, I might want to go to one place while she prefers another, which leads to a small argument.

× Yeah, I love chatting with my my friend, especially sharing stories with them.

✓ Yeah, I love chatting with my friends, especially sharing stories with them.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because the pronoun 'them' refers to multiple people, indicating more than one friend.

× Yeah, I love chatting with my my friend, especially sharing stories with them.

✓ Yeah, I love chatting with my friend, especially sharing stories with him or her.

The pronoun 'them' is plural and does not agree with the singular noun 'friend'. It should be 'him' or 'her' to match the singular 'friend'.

× And it's really nice to, uh, check out each other and talking about random things or just casual talk.

✓ And it's really nice to, uh, check out each other and talk about random things or just have casual talk.

The verb forms after 'and' should be parallel. 'Check out' is followed by 'talking', which is incorrect. It should be 'talk' to maintain parallel structure.

× I usually talking about something random with my friend and sometimes she talk about her life update or her busy activity which I really enjoy to hear it.

✓ I usually talk about something random with my friend and sometimes she talks about her life updates or her busy activities which I really enjoy hearing.

The verb 'talking' should be 'talk' to match the present simple tense. 'She talk' should be 'she talks' for third person singular agreement. 'Life update' and 'busy activity' should be plural. 'Enjoy to hear it' should be 'enjoy hearing'.

× I usually talking about something random with my friend and sometimes she talk about her life update or her busy activity which I really enjoy to hear it.

✓ I usually talk about something random with my friend and sometimes she talks about her life updates or her busy activities which I really enjoy hearing.

'Life update' and 'busy activity' should be plural to indicate multiple updates and activities.

× sometimes she talk about her life update or her busy activity

✓ sometimes she talks about her life updates or her busy activities

The verb 'talk' should be 'talks' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'.

× I rather chat with my only one friend because I don't really feel comfortable when it comes to a group so I feel more relaxed and enjoy when talking with my only friend.

✓ I would rather chat with only one friend because I don't really feel comfortable when it comes to a group, so I feel more relaxed and enjoy talking with my only friend.

'I rather chat' should be 'I would rather chat' to express preference. 'My only one friend' is awkward; 'only one friend' is better. 'Enjoy when talking' should be 'enjoy talking'.

× I rather chat with my only one friend because I don't really feel comfortable when it comes to a group

✓ I would rather chat with only one friend because I don't really feel comfortable when it comes to a group

The modal verb 'would' is needed to express preference correctly in 'would rather'.

× I rather chat with my only one friend

✓ I would rather chat with only one friend

The phrase 'my only one friend' is incorrect; 'only one friend' is the correct quantifier usage.

× I would pre more prefer to communicate face to face because I love real life experience and talking in real life will so much better because we can see the emotion and expression.

✓ I would prefer to communicate face to face because I love real-life experiences and talking in real life is so much better because we can see the emotions and expressions.

'Pre more prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'would prefer'. 'Real life experience' should be plural 'real-life experiences'. 'Will so much better' should be 'is so much better'. 'Emotion and expression' should be plural 'emotions and expressions'.

× I would pre more prefer to communicate face to face

✓ I would prefer to communicate face to face

The phrase 'pre more prefer' is incorrect; the correct modal verb phrase is 'would prefer'.

× talking in real life will so much better because we can see the emotion and expression.

✓ talking in real life is so much better because we can see the emotions and expressions.

The verb 'will' is incorrect here; present simple 'is' should be used to express general truth. 'Emotion and expression' should be plural.

× I argue with my friend sometimes, but not so often.

✓ I argue with my friends sometimes, but not so often.

Using 'friends' plural is more natural when talking about arguing with friends in general.

× if you want to choose place to hang out and then I really want to go to this place and she want to go to another place and then sometimes we are going about that.

✓ if you want to choose a place to hang out and then I really want to go to this place and she wants to go to another place and then sometimes we argue about that.

'Choose place' needs an article 'a place'. 'She want' should be 'she wants' for third person singular. 'We are going about that' is incorrect; it should be 'we argue about that'.

× if you want to choose place to hang out

✓ if you want to choose a place to hang out

The noun 'place' requires the indefinite article 'a' when singular and unspecified.

× she want to go to another place

✓ she wants to go to another place

The verb 'want' should be 'wants' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'.

× sometimes we are going about that.

✓ sometimes we argue about that.

The phrase 'are going about that' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'argue about that'.